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Today I needed went to english school ,and learn english ,

In the morning , my mom drived her car went to GVO with me .

I just sleap five hours yesterday ,so I was very tired.

My friend told me to sleap some time , I can feel enerage.

I sleap two hours in computer room , I feel well .

I told myself if I go to bed latter , I will transforming a fat pig .

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    我作為必要的今天,做學校english,到學習去了english。

    早上,drived被做了的我的媽媽,她的車與我一起GVO去了。

    因為只有sleap做昨天5小時,我非常疲勞了。

    我的朋友,對我說了在五日的時間的sleap中,能我感到enerage。

    我在計算機室sleap要2小時,好。

    我,對自己說了如果打算改變胖的豬只,去床後者C去。

  • 葳葳
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    This morning I had to go to English school and learn English.

    In the morning , my mom drove me to GVO by her car.

    I only slept five hours last night, so I felt very tired.

    My friend told me to sleap a few time, then I could be better.

    I felt well afetr slept two hours in the computer room.

    I told myself if I go to bed too late, I will become a fat pig.

    *This morning I had to go to English school and learn English.

    today表的時間比較長 用this morning更好

    用had比用needed好 用needed也可以 跟had一樣要加原形

    *In the morning , my mom drove me to GVO by her car.

    drive的過去式是drove

    drove to有去的意味 不用再加go

    drove her car with me 比較偏向"跟我一起去"

    drove me by her car 比較偏向"載我去" 幫你改掉

    *I only slept five hours last night, so I felt very tired.

    用only比用just好一點 修飾的主詞不太一樣

    sleep的過去式是slept

    yesterday表的時間比較長 用last night更好

    覺得很累用felt強調感覺更好 用was也可以

    *My friend told me to sleap a few time, then I could be better.

    用a few time比some time好 強調一下下

    加then表達因果關係

    enerage應該是energetic

    can的過去式could

    better比較好 睡一下不可能會精力十足

    *I felt well afetr slept two hours in the computer room.

    I felt well 放前面放後面都可以 最好用after表達因果關係

    電腦教室要加the

    *I told myself if I go to bed too late, I will become a fat pig

    too late(太晚睡)比latter好 因為沒有可以修飾的主詞

    transform 有改變形態(如蝌蚪變青蛙)的意味

    become偏向漸漸變成而不是改變形態

    p.s.晚睡為啥會變豬?

    全部學起來喔 參考參考

    2006-04-02 11:42:42 補充:

    其他的也都差不多 因為每個人要表示的不太一樣英文有很多種用法不只有一種我是鑽牛角尖的那種

    參考資料: 我(有錯請指正)
  • 1 0 年前

    Today I have to go to English school,

    In the morning , my mom drived me to GVO.

    I sleep five hours only lastnight, so I was very tired.

    My friend suggest me to sleep more so that I could feel better.

    I slept for two hours in the computer room , I did feel better.

    I told myself if I go to bed latter, I will becoming a fat pig.

    2006-04-02 10:46:30 補充:

    I had to go to English school today.In the morning, my mom drove me to GVO.I slept five hours only lastnight, so I was very tired.My friend suggested me to sleep more so that I could have more energy.I slept for two hours in the computer room, and I did feel better.

    2006-04-02 10:46:55 補充:

    I told myself that if I keep going to bed too late, I will becom a fat pig.

    參考資料: 這樣應該差不多了啦~"~ 也許你們老師還會在修...
  • 1 0 年前

    Today I had to go to my English school and learn English.

    In the morning, my mom drove me to GVO.

    I had just slept five hours yesterday, so I was very tired.

    My friend told me to sleep more time, so I can have more energy.(是ENERGY吧...)

    Then I slept two hours in the computer room, and I felt well afterward.

    I told myself if I go to bed later, I will transform into a fat pig. ^^"

    大概就降囉~我也有上過GVO呢~~

    2006-04-02 10:37:37 補充:

    哪有...明明是drove

    怎ㄇ可能是drived

    ~"~

    參考資料: 我ㄉ大頭
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  • Lv 4
    1 0 年前

    鬼火的才是正確的^^

  • 1 0 年前

    今天我需要去英國學校,並且學會英語

    早晨, 我的媽媽drived 她的汽車去GVO 與我。

    I 正義sleap 五個昨天小時,如此我是非常疲乏。

    我的朋友告訴了我對sleap 某個時候, 我能感覺enerage 。

    I sleap 二個小時在電腦室, 我感覺好。

    我告訴了自己如果我上床後者, 我意志變換一頭肥胖豬。

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