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Today is a bad day ,because I was feel very hot.

I can\'t stay outside ,when I haven\'t wear jacket.

If I was stay outside , I will die on the road.

My ask me didn\'t stay on the road , so I caughtn\'t broken her .

However any parents are all hope you heathly and happy.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    Today is a bad day ,because I felt very hot. But I couldn't stay outside without a jacket.Because if I've  stayed outside , I would die on the road.And my parents asked me not to stay on the road , so I caughtn't break her rule .???"我不懂你想說什麼?"However ,all of the parents always hope their children be heathly and happy. 您的文法有許多地方要改進詞義也不大通順我只就文法部分幫您更正但仍不確定這篇日記您要表達的"重點"為何?

    參考資料: 英文老師
  • 1 0 年前

    Today is a bad day ,because I was feel very hot.

    ====>Today is a bad day because of the heat.

    I can't stay outside ,when I haven't wear jacket.

    ====>I could not stay outside when I had not worn a jacket.

    If I was stay outside , I will die on the road.

    ====>If I had stayed outside, I would die on the road.

    My ask me didn't stay on the road , so I caughtn't broken her .

    ====>My mother asked me not to stay on the road, and I should obey her.

    However any parents are all hope you heathly and happy.

    ====>However, parents all hope their children to be healthy and happy.

  • 1 0 年前

    1. Today is a bad day because I feel very hot.

    Because I feel very hot, today is a bad day.

    Today is a bad day because of hot weather.

    2. I can't stay outside when I haven't worn the jacket.

    When I haven't wron the jacket, I can't stay outside.

    3. If I stayed outside, I would be dead on the road.

    4. My mother asked me not to stay on the road, so I couldn't hit her.

    5. However, every parents hope you can be healthy and happy.

    參考資料: 自己
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