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How do movies and television influence people’s behavior?

How do movies and television influence people’s comportment? Actuality, the television and the movie truly influence people\'s life at every time. That is an important problem. .The unhealthy matter of moves and television will make people’s aberration. But, really not all television program and movies are bed.

For example the society more and more opened in recent years. Movie or television criterion are opening .Like the murder or suicide plot will very extremely lifelike, this causes makes the present youth abundance to imitate, thereupon a lot of society\'s murder case also in abundance emerges .

But if must mistakes push for the media is too unfair, everyone receives the same message and an idea will be differently. it have to strict checking these young people who don’t judgment. Because they are the major viewers .

But the media transmits the message possibility is a new idea, I believed it’s good .

While watches the movie is not only the leisure, is one kind of study also may help us to ponder

But the television certainly exceeds movie in influence, recently are often performed the rescue poor others story in Taiwan, some low income households poor others or in the family the bitter experience of accident. People all have obtained the help because of the television media report, wasn\'t this the good influence?

Now most of media are unceasing competition, many program or movie of poor areeverywhere, but could not totally deny all media, some television program like Discovery provides a very good for ecology knowledge .

The movie has to show in society\'s question, and the racial discrimination or the war .It let the people to think about this question .

It’s important to chooses you want to see and you will absorb from the media to can be the good influence!

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    Actuality 改: Actually

    But, really not all television program and movies are bed.

    改: But, not all of the TV program and movie are bad, indeed.

    For example the society more and more opened in recent years.

    改: The society has been more and more modern in recent years.

    will very extremely lifelike 改: will be ~~

    this causes makes the present youth abundance to imitate, thereupon a lot of society's murder case also in abundance emerges .

    改: this causes make the teenagers to imitate, therefore, a lot of murder cases emerge.

    (已經 a lot of 了,就不要 in abundance =..=)

    it have to strict checking these young people who don’t judgment. Because they are the major viewers .

    改 : It has to strict checking theses teenagers who can't make judgment becuase they are not mature enough. (because 不可單獨成句)

    watches the movie is not only the leisure -> 改為watching

    wasn't this the good influence? -> 單獨一句

    It’s important to chooses you want to see and you will absorb from the media to can be the good influence!

    改: It is important for you to choose what to watch and you will learn from the influence of the media.

    基本上你的文法錯的還蠻多的 ~~

    不過句子很長~~值得佳許 ^^

    參考資料: 本身是英文老師
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