哇係倩a 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

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1我在高一時有加入羽球社When I was study in senior high school, I was attending badminton curricular.2我的專長有word, excel, access, front page, power pointMy special skill has word, excel, access, front page and power point.3 自我介紹My name is Cathy, I am twenty years old.  There are five people in my family. There are father, mother, younger brother, younger sister, and me.4我最喜歡的科目是中文,因為中文是本土語言,而且中文很美。My favorably subject is Chinese.  Because Chinese is local language in Taiwan, and Chinese is vary beautiful. 5希望好還要更好,並且提升學生的學習能力I hope better and better, and advance student’s learning ability.6主要是國立學校, 交通又方便,最重要的是讀書風氣的盛行I choose the reason of the school is national school; the second is that the traffic is convenient.7 推薦一本好書 What kind of books or movies have you seen recently?我推薦”成功的一百個方法”~改變我的生活態度及觀念,讓我變的樂觀積極I recently “success’s one hundred avenue”, it change my life cheval and abstraction, let me become cheeriness and active.8我會選擇這個科系是因為我的興趣,而且這是我最喜歡的科目I choose this subject because it my interest, and I really like this subject.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    1我在高一時有加入羽球社

    When I was study in senior high school, I was attending badminton curricular.

    *** When I was in sensor high school, I was a memeber of badminton club.

    2我的專長有word, excel, access, front page, power point

    ***I am good at Microsoft Office including word, Excel, Access, Frontpage and Power point.

    My special skill has word, excel, access, front page and power point.

    3 自我介紹

    My name is Cathy, I am twenty years old. There are five people in my family. There are father, mother, younger brother, younger sister, and me.

    *** My name is Cathy (Last name). .......They are father, mother, ounger brother, younger sister, and me.

    4我最喜歡的科目是中文,因為中文是本土語言,而且中文很美。

    ****My favorate subject in school is Chinese because Chinese is a local language in Taiwan, and I really think Chinese is a vary beautiful language.

    5希望好還要更好,並且提升學生的學習能力

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    什麼東西好還要更好? 什麼東西可以提升學生的學習能力?

    6主要是國立學校, 交通又方便,最重要的是讀書風氣的盛行

    ***The reason I chose this university was becuase this school is a national school and it has a good location.

    I choose the reason of the school is national school; the second is that the traffic is convenient.

    7 推薦一本好書 What kind of books or movies have you seen recently?我推薦”成功的一百個方法”~改變我的生活態度及觀念,讓我變的樂觀積極

    **I would like to recomend a book,the title is "The one houndred ways go get successd" This book has changed my prospectives about my life style and attitude and made me be more positive and agreesive.

    I recently “success’s one hundred avenue”, it change my life cheval and abstraction, let me become cheeriness and active.

    8我會選擇這個科系是因為我的興趣,而且這是我最喜歡的科目

    **The reason I choise this major was becuase of my interest and this subject has been my favorite subject in school.

    I choose this subject because it my interest, and I really like this subject.

    參考資料: 英文老師
  • 1 0 年前

    No,freshman means a student in his/her first year of university/college, not high school.

  • Jully
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前

    freshman 就可以表示說是高一的意思 .... 不過沒有一個人點明 ... when I was a freshman in high school, .....

    供你參考!

  • 1 0 年前

    1我在高一時有加入羽球社

    When I was in first year in senior high school, I had joined the badmington club.

    2我的專長有word, excel, access, front page, power point

    My special skills are word, excel, access, front page and power point. (computer literacy)

    3 自我介紹

    My name is Cathy, I am twenty years old. There are five people in my family. They are father, mother, younger brother, younger sister, and me. (or you can write "which are my parents, younger brother and sister and myself)

    4我最喜歡的科目是中文,因為中文是本土語言,而且中文很美。

    My favorably subject is Chinese. Because Chinese is the local language in Taiwan, and Chinese is a beautiful language.

    5希望好還要更好,並且提升學生的學習能力

    I hope to be better and better, and lift up my learning ability.

    6主要是國立學校, 交通又方便,最重要的是讀書風氣的盛行

    The reason I chose this school is beacuse it is a national school; and the transport for me to the school is convenient. The most important reason is the study environment in the school is nice and positive.

    7 推薦一本好書 What kind of books or movies have you seen recently?我推薦”成功的一百個方法”~改變我的生活態度及觀念,讓我變的樂觀積極

    I like the book "the 100 ways to success" (“success’s one hundred avenue”). The book has changed my attitude toward like and thought. It made me bocome more happy and positive.

    8我會選擇這個科系是因為我的興趣,而且這是我最喜歡的科目

    I choose this subject (falculty) because it is my interest, and it is also my favourite.

    參考資料: myself~
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  • ?
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    1 0 年前

    1我在高一時有加入羽球社

    When I was in the first grade of high school, I had joined badminton association.

    2我的專長有word, excel, access, front page, power point

    My skills in operating computer are word, excel, access, front page and power point.

    3 自我介紹

    My name is Cathy, I am twenty years old. There are five people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my younger brother, my younger sister, and myself.

    4我最喜歡的科目是中文,因為中文是本土語言,而且中文很美。

    My favorite subject is Chinese literature. Because Chinese is motherland language in Taiwan, and Mandarin itself is very beautiful.

    5希望好還要更好,並且提升學生的學習能力

    I hope to get better (and better) progress in study, and hope all students can improve their learning ability.

    6主要是國立學校, 交通又方便,最重要的是讀書風氣的盛行

    The reason I choose this school is because it is established by National Educational Ministry; besides, it is convenient for commute and most of all, it is a very good academicism of this school.

    7 推薦一本好書 What kind of books or movies have you seen recently?我推薦”成功的一百個方法”~改變我的生活態度及觀念,讓我變的樂觀積極

    I recommend you to read a book “success’s one hundred avenue”. I have changed my living attitude and concept by reading this book. Also this book made me optimistic and aggressive.

    8我會選擇這個科系是因為我的興趣,而且這是我最喜歡的科目

    I choose this subject is for my interest, you may say that this is my favorite subject.

  • 1 0 年前

    1我在高一時有加入羽球社

    When I was in senior high school, I was involving in badminton curricular.

    2我的專長有word, excel, access, front page, power point

    My special skills are word, excel, access, front page and power point.

    3 自我介紹

    My name is Cathy, I am twenty years old. There are five people in my family. There are father, mother, younger brother, younger sister, and me.

    4我最喜歡的科目是中文,因為中文是本土語言,而且中文很美。

    My favorably subject is Chinese. Because Chinese is the mother language in Taiwan, and Chinese is vary beautiful.

    5希望好還要更好,並且提升學生的學習能力

    I hope better and better, also promote students' learning ability.

    6主要是國立學校, 交通又方便,最重要的是讀書風氣的盛行

    The reason I chosen public school because the transportation is very convenient

    and the second reason is that the school has good environment of academicism.

    7 推薦一本好書 What kind of books or movies have you seen recently?我推薦”成功的一百個方法”~改變我的生活態度及觀念,讓我變的樂觀積極

    I recommend the book named “the one hundred way of how to seccess" because it change the attitude of my life and abstraction and make me become more cheerful and active.

    8我會選擇這個科系是因為我的興趣,而且這是我最喜歡的科目

    I choose this subject because of my interest, also this subject is my favor.

    參考資料: myself
  • 1 0 年前

    1我在高一時有加入羽球社

    When I was study in senior high school, I JOIN badminton CLUB.

    2我的專長有word, excel, access, front page, power point

    My COMPUTER SKILL IN SOFTWARE ARE MICSOFT word, excel, access, front page and power point.

    3 自我介紹

    My name is Cathy. I am twenty years old. There are five people in my family. There are father, mother, younger brother, younger sister, and me.

    4我最喜歡的科目是中文,因為中文是本土語言,而且中文很美。

    My FAVORITE MAJOR is Chinese. Because Chinese is OFFICAL language in Taiwan, and Chinese is vary beautiful LANGUAGE.

    (外國人 通常沒有人會用美來講中文,要說明是聲音美嗎 ?還是什麼美 ?)

    5希望好還要更好,並且提升學生的學習能力

    什麼東西好還要更好啊???沒有主題 是你嗎 ?

    I HOPE TO STUDY MORE IN CHINESE AND IMPROVE MY ABILITY IN STUDYING.

    6主要是國立學校, 交通又方便,最重要的是讀書風氣的盛行

    THE MAIN REASON THAT WHY I CHOOSE IT BECAUSE IT IS A NATIONAL SCHOOL. SECOND, IT IS IN A CONVENIENT LOCTION.BUT MOST OF ALL, THE SCHOOL HAS A GREAT CULTURE IN STUDYING.

    7 推薦一本好書 What kind of books or movies have you seen recently?我推薦”成功的一百個方法”~改變我的生活態度及觀念,讓我變的樂觀積極

    I recently READ A BOOK NAME“100 WAYS TO BE SUCESSFUL”, it TOTALLY changeD my ATTITUDE TO LIFE. IT MADE ME BECOME MORE POSITIVE.

    8我會選擇這個科系是因為我的興趣,而且這是我最喜歡的科目

    I choose this MAJOR because it IS my interest, and ALWAYS BEING MY FAVORITE MAJOR.

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