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幫我檢查這篇英文作文有沒有文法或其他方面的問題

About two months ago, I went to see the movie \"Match Point\" with my friend.

Actually, I was attracted to the movie when the preview was disseminated in the TV.

So, after I saw \"Match Point\" , it becomes one of my favorite movies.

And why the film has great appeal for me. I think not only beautiful leading lady, but

also the director \"Woody Allen\" and it\'s script. The movie is different from general

romance, and it has a varied plot. Moreover, the playwright use parts of opening

remarks \" I\'d rather be lucky than good\" to throughout the whole movie. It make

the film be deeply in my mind. This is the reason why I love this movie.

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  • Lv 5
    1 0 年前
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    Bonjour!Je suis Monsieur MeowCat!Actually, I was attracted to the movie when the preview was disseminated in the TV.

    --->Actually, I was attracted to the movie when the preview was disseminated on TV.

    And why the film has great appeal for me. I think not only

    beautiful leading lady, but also the director "Woody Allen" and it's

    script.

    ----->

    And why did the film attract me so much?

    Not only the beautiful leading lady but also the director "Woody Allen" and its

    script attracted me. the playwright use parts of opening remarks " I'd rather be lucky than good" to throughout the whole movie.----> the playwright use parts of opening remarks " I'd rather be lucky than good"  throughout the whole movie.It make the film be deeply in my mind. ---->It makes the film deep in my mind.大致這樣~有問題再跟喵貓講Thanks to Monsieur BossCat

    參考資料: 神奇寶貝
  • 1 0 年前

    括號是我認為有錯ㄉ地方!或是建議更改ㄉ地方

    About two months ago, I went to see [watch]the movie "Match Point" with my friend.

    Actually, I was attracted to the movie when the preview was disseminated in the TV.

    So, after I saw "Match Point" , it becomes one of my favorite movies[因為是one of也就是其中之一的 意思 所以是單數 不用es]

    And why the film has great appeal for me. I think not only[the] beautiful leading lady, but

    also the director "Woody Allen" and it's script. The movie is different from general

    romance, and it has a varied plot. Moreover, the playwright use parts of opening

    remarks " I'd rather be lucky than good" to throughout the whole movie. It make

    the film be deeply in my mind. This is the reason why I love this movie.

    後面應該沒啥錯誤ㄌ,ㄋ是不是英文係滴?文章寫的不錯哩

    參考資料: me
  • 1 0 年前

    It make the film be deeply in my mind

    make這個地方有問題ㄛ!^_^

    參考資料: 自己
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