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ㄚ娟 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請幫我看看英文文法對不對..急!

如題,請幫我看看有沒有更精簡的寫法,或哪裡有錯,謝謝^^

The coming of the great company is the immortality brand of world. 「Root of the land 」 Conducted by chairman 劉金標,the GIANT was pull on the national stage and it’s now become the supreme bicycle company in the world . In progress itself constantly, the logos of administer professedly, it shows the best combination of the accounts to people. The huge desire to be excellent, we expect that this great company can keep billet of leader index constantly in the world

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    The coming of the great company is the immortality brand of world. 「Root of the land 」, Conducted by chairman 劉金標,the GIANT was pulled on the national stage and it has now become the supreme bicycle company in the world . In progress itself constantly, the logos of administer professedly, it shows the best combination of the accounts to people. To make the huge desire an excellent one, we expect that this great company can keep billet of leader index constantly in the world .

    已經幫你訂正過囉~

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