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Hip-hop, came from the U.S, is popular to teenagers in recent year. Many teenagers like Hip-hop style, because it can let them feel free. Hip-hop consist of many compositions. For example, like slack jeans, big-size clothes and hats, are all necessary.

Many stores sale Hip-hop clothing, which are come from other countries or hand made. Teenagers are always notice what is the “in” style for Hip-hop. If they want be looked Hip-hop, they might wear black or white clothes with slack jeans, gym shoes and some of them are also wear necklaces or earrings. Teenagers always say some special words to express Hip-hop style, like “what’s up”, “yo”, “check out”, etc. Sometimes teenagers have a Hip-hop dancing show. The best music for Hip-hop is “rap”, so many oversea singers’ songs are used in dancing. No matter boys or girls, also keep high through this activity.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    Hip-hop, came from the U.S, is popular to teenagers in recent year. Many teenagers like Hip-hop style, because it can let them feel free. Hip-hop consist of many compositions. For example, like slack jeans, big-size clothes and hats, are all necessary.

    ~~~~~~Hip-hop came from U.S. , is popular among teenagers in recent years. Many teenagers love Hip-hop style because it let them feel free. Hip-hop style consists of many components like slack jeans, big-size clothes and hats that are all essential. (The essential components for Hio-hop style consists of slack jeans, big-size clothes and hats)~~~~~

    Many stores sale Hip-hop clothing, which are come from other countries or hand made. Teenagers are always notice what is the “in” style for Hip-hop. If they want be looked Hip-hop, they might wear black or white clothes with slack jeans, gym shoes and some of them are also wear necklaces or earrings.

    ~~~~~There are many stores sell Hip-hop clothing which is handmade or from other countries. Teenagers always take notice of what is so called "in" for the Hip-hop style. If they want to be looked like Hip-hop , they might wear black or white clothes that match with slack jeans and gym shoes. Some of them might even wear necklaces or earings.~~~~~~

    Teenagers always say some special words to express Hip-hop style, like “what’s up”, “yo”, “check out”, etc. Sometimes teenagers have a Hip-hop dancing show. The best music for Hip-hop is “rap”, so many oversea singers’ songs are used in dancing. No matter boys or girls, also keep high through this activity.

    ~~~~In order to act like Hip-hop, teenagers use popular slang like "What's up", "yo", "check out"...etc in expression and give a Hip-hop dancing show once in a while. Of course, the best music for Hip-hop dance is "rap", and many of oversea singers make songs of rap and be use in the Hip-hop dance. Teenagers all get excited through the Hip-hop dance. ~~~~

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  • 1 0 年前

    臀-單足跳,來自美國, 是流行的青少年在新近的年. 許多的青少年相似的憂鬱-單足跳稱呼,因為它可以讓他們覺得自由的. 臀-單足跳包括許多的寫作. 譬如,相似的鬆弛瓊斯,大-尺寸衣服和帽子,完全必要的.

    許多的船用物料販賣憂鬱-單足跳衣服,這是來自其他的國家手工造的. 青少年是是的總是通知 “在” 稱呼為了臀-單足跳. 假如他們想要是注視屁股-單足跳, 他們勢力穿黑白色衣服和鬆弛瓊斯, 健身房鞋子和某些的他們是也穿項鏈耳環. 青少年總是說某些特別的文字表達臀-單足跳風格, 喜歡 “有什麼事情”, “唷”, “退出旅館”, 等等有時青少年有臀-單足跳舞蹈表示. 音樂佳作欄為了臀-單足跳是 “叩擊聲”, 如此多外國的歌手的歌被使用於舞蹈. 不論男孩女孩子,也保留高的穿過這行動.

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