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Hip-hop, came from the U.S, is popular to teenagers in recent year. Many teenagers like Hip-hop style, because it can let them feel free. Hip-hop consist of many compositions. For example, like slack jeans, big-size clothes and hats, are all necessary. Many stores sale Hip-hop clothing, which are come from other... 顯示更多 Hip-hop, came from the U.S, is popular to teenagers in recent year. Many teenagers like Hip-hop style, because it can let them feel free. Hip-hop consist of many compositions. For example, like slack jeans, big-size clothes and hats, are all necessary.

Many stores sale Hip-hop clothing, which are come from other countries or hand made. Teenagers are always notice what is the “in” style for Hip-hop. If they want be looked Hip-hop, they might wear black or white clothes with slack jeans, gym shoes and some of them are also wear necklaces or earrings. Teenagers always say some special words to express Hip-hop style, like “what’s up”, “yo”, “check out”, etc. Sometimes teenagers have a Hip-hop dancing show. The best music for Hip-hop is “rap”, so many oversea singers’ songs are used in dancing. No matter boys or girls, also keep high through this activity.
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