kiki 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫我看一下英文作文....有關immortality

不好意思...

我今天中午以前就要了..

麻煩幫我看一下有什麼問題...

感激不盡!!

Immortality means that a person can keep her body always young. She doesn’t worry the white hair and the wrinkles. Perhaps the one can ride the roller coaster to enjoy the excitement without the heart disease happen. She can eat what she want and don’t be afraid the digestive system makes her uncomfortable. In addition, she is full of energy to do everything and doesn’t need to afraid when she will tire. Nothing will stop her.

However, there is not everything going well with the young body. Some disadvantages are bothering the young person. First, she must depend upon her own ability to support herself. So, she has to work hard. And because of that, she can’t accept the old person annuity. Second, the one will not cherish the young times. Human beings often don’t understand to seize the day. Moreover this young condition will be able to cause the matter more serious.

On other hand, the young person may lack some kind of experiences. The becoming older is the main key. The one who is never old is impossible to realize the age’s worry. In some degrees, her life would lack processes like old. Maybe it is not everyone want to experience. But as the human we know, we have a life with several unhappy、some things unsuitable and even have to prepare to know that we will old and die.

No one can young forever. But the matter has the possibility to be able to occur in future days. Until that day becoming, we may actually see problems beyond our imagination.

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  • Jully
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    1 0 年前
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    When a person can keep his/her body young without any aging, we call the person immortal. One doesn’t have to worry about showing the white hair or the wrinkles. One maybe even able to ride the roller coaster to experience the excitement without fearing the heart attack may happen. One can also eats whatever he/she wants and doesn’t need to be afraid if the digestive system would make him/her uncomfortable. In addition, he/she will never have to worry about feeling tired and is full of energy to do everything. Nothing will stop him/her.

    ____>> afraid is an adjective and the lexical phrase is "be afraid of"

    However, something may not go well with the young body. There are some disadvantages may be bothering the immortal person. First, he/she must depend upon his/her own ability to support himself/herself. So, he/she has to work hard. Because of that, she can’t accept the old person annuity. (not a good point since you just mention that the immortal person can do everything .... to be able to work to support his/her life shouldn't be a problem at all)Second, the one will not cherish the time he/she has since he/she has the immortal life. Human beings often don’t understand to seize the day till they lose it. Therefore, this may get worse if life is immortal.

    2006-05-11 03:20:51 補充:

    On other hand, the immortal person may lack of some kind of experiences. Some experience can only gained from becoming older. Tim is the key. The one never getting old is impossible to realize the value of time.

    2006-05-11 03:21:04 補充:

    To some degrees, his/her life would not be complete. Perhaps, not all people want the aging experience. Yet, it is the life with happiness, unpleasent experience,and laughters andtears makes it precious.

    2006-05-11 03:21:23 補充:

    No one can stay young forever. But the matter is the possibility for the future. Until that day when immortality truly happens comes, people can only imagine about how it would be at this moement.

    2006-05-11 03:22:23 補充:

    Same thing happens with they, we when you refer to all the other people in the real world. People will be a better choice.

    2006-05-11 03:22:48 補充:

    Same thing happens with they, we when you refer to all the other people in the real world. People will be a better choice. Yet, you can still use "we." In this way, you should use "we " from the beginning to the end.

    For your information, and please keep working on this!!

    Good luck!!

    參考資料: someone in the U.S.
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