由衣 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫幫我看英文文法有錯誤嗎

I was born in a big family. My parents gave me full love and healthy philosophy of life. So I trust myself can communicate with others well, I always show my best honest heart around my friendship.

In my school life is both a joy and a burden. The joy is found in the life-long friends I make during my school years. They not only have a great influence on my interpersonal relations but also help me through thick and thin.

In my free time I enjoy listening to the music because it also accompanies me through loneliness and sorrow.

In everything I do, I will put out my best effort. Even if I fail, I will not be disappointed. I can only try again. This way, I can catch the happiness which is at hand and root it deep in my heart.

In this summer I will graduate from the university, and my major is accounting. For the future road, I hope I can learn more knowledge of other aspects, even if at any possible job.

不知道文法對不對,麻煩好心人可以幫我看一下,哪邊有錯嗎Q_Q

謝謝嚕~~~感謝回覆的大大!!

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    I was born in a big family. My parents give me full love and influence me with a healthy life philosophy, so I believe that I'm able to communicate with others well. I always show my most turely heart to my friends.

    Along with my school life, are both joyfulness and burdens. The joyfulness was found from the life-long friends I have make during my school years. They not only had a great influence in my interpersonal relations but also had helped me through thick and thin.

    In my free time, I enjoy listening to the music, because it accompanies me through loneliness and sorrow.

    In everything I do, I put my best effort. Even if I fail, I would not be disappointed. I would try it again and again. In this way, I have got the happiness and it has been rooted deep in my heart.

    In this summer, I will graduate from the university with the major of Accounting. In the future, I hope I can learn more from other aspects in any possible job.

    稍微修改了一些用語.參考看看吧!是要寫找工作的自傳嗎?如果是的話,可能需要再多加詳細一些喔!!加油囉!!

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