徐佩雯 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 2 0 年前

關於”人性慾念”之小短文,英文翻譯!!20點~

我手邊有個急需翻譯的小短文

是要參加\"國際比賽\"..用的文案

由於....

文案有點詩意

個人有上翻譯網站~~付費請專人翻譯

但還在苦等對方的回覆

想看看...有沒有\"更貼切\".\"更快速\"的英文翻譯~

有請各位幫幫忙了~

謝謝!!

需翻譯的內容如下:(包含標題與內文)

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主標:失落的城市

副標:見證一場世紀末最具殺傷力的預演

發現…..

“慾念”是最美麗的人造武器。

它 預支蓬勃,

它 滋長科技,

它 豐富生命,

它..也氾濫成災….。

隨之…..

高樓築起、圍籬遍佈,

門戶林立、柵欄四起。

情感疲乏的人們,

不再熱情擁抱,

不再埋情寫字,

不再寄情思念。

自此…..

人與人之間,

最靠近的,不一定是最親近的。

慢慢地,

日漸疏離的城市開始瓦解,

誰都無法倖免於難。

已更新項目:

因為是參賽用的(國際比賽)~

為免文法與用詞錯誤...貽笑大方!!

還麻煩各位不要使用翻譯網站與軟體喔...

感恩啊~

4 個解答

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  • Jason
    Lv 5
    2 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Title: Desolate City

    Sub-Title: Witness the Most Devastating Rehearsal of the End of Century (or "at the Turn of the Century")

    Discovering...

    “Desire” is the most beautiful (or elegant) weapon made by men.

    It advances growth,

    It promotes technology,

    It enriches lives,

    It… creates disasters as well.

    Thus… (or Consequently…)

    High-rises are built, fences are erected,

    Doors are shut, gates are locked.

    Wary (or indifferent) people,

    No longer hug with affections,

    No longer write with emotions,

    No longer think with kindness.

    Subsequently…

    The distance between one another,

    Can no longer be measured with physical space.

    Gradually,

    An impassive city begins to wither (or crumble, collapse),

    With no one to survive.

    _________________________________________________________________

    I actually hesitated to translate this for you...

    After all, it is meant to enter an international contest,

    Which naturally means it should be your own creations.

    But since this is a very well-written short essay, and I just help with the translations,

    I would appreciate some credit if you win.

    Good luck!

    2006-05-18 00:12:10 補充:

    This may be better:

    No longer EMBRACE with affections,

    No longer write with PASSION...

    Please put "Jason H. Hu" for credit. Thanks.

    Really wish I can see your creation. Good luck!

    參考資料: 15 years in US + a former amature poet
  • 2 0 年前

    Mainly mark: The lost city pair is marked: Witness a preview that has lethality most at end of the century to find .

    " wanting to read " is the most beautiful artificial weapon.

    It pays in advance flourishingly, it grows science and technology, it enriches the life, it.. Overflow too .

    Thereupon .

    The high building is built, palisades spread all over, the door stands in great numbers, the bar rises from all around.

    People that the emotion is tired, no longer embrace warmly, does not bury the feeling again and write, no longer send the feeling to miss.

    Since this .

    Between men, the closest, might not be most on intimate terms.

    Slowly, the day by day estranged city begins to disintegrate, everyone is unable to escape death by sheer luck.

    2006-05-17 16:14:46 補充:

    我已經盡力ㄌ~~不知道對不對!!

  • 2 0 年前

    Main sign: Loses city vice- sign: A testimony century's end most has

    the lethality the preview

    Discovery... . "The desire" is the most beautiful man-made

    weapon. It pays in advance vigorously, it develops the science and

    technology, its rich life, it. Also 氾 overflows to cause

    disaster... .

    Along with it... . The tall building builds, 圍籬 proliferates, the

    gateway stands in great numbers, the stockade rises from all

    directions. The emotion tired people, no longer warmly hug, no longer

    buries the sentiment to write, no longer expresses feelings missing.

    From now on... . Between the person and the person, most approaches,

    not necessarily is most is intimate with.

    Slowly, day after day sparsely leaves the city starts to disintegrate,

    everybody is unable to escape death by a hair's breadth.

    參考資料: 自己
  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

    我想這段

    It advances growth,

    It promotes technology,

    It enriches lives,

    It… creates disasters as well

    的"It"改成"She"或"He"會好一點

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