浪人 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫我看看這篇英文日記哪裡要修改

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好無聊 我想把英文學好 想說打看看 今天在幹麻 發現 真的很難= =

這是我打的 幫我看看哪裡需要修改 文法有錯嗎><?

Arriving home I hung my schoolbag on the handgrip of room\'s door. I trun on my poor computer then I eat dinner, god it\'s seven o\'clock now.

Leter, I searched for HBO to see program which I want to see today then I found the \"Eurotrip\" at 7:30 p.m. . It is a funny film .

It say has a boy who is cheating by his girlfriend and broke up on graduate party . She caressive with her new boyfriend on the stage of party .

Scotty drank a lot of wine that night. He got dead drunk peeimg on bath towel belong to his young brother.

HA HA HA ~~~~~~~~~~~~ It\'s too much to say completely .

I\'m tired going to sleep. Bye Bye

May,22 Friday

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  • 1 0 年前
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    After arriving at home I hung my schoolbag on the handgrip of room's door. I turned on my poor computer, then I ate dinner. God, it's seven o'clock now.Later, I searched  HBO to watch program which I wanted to see today. Then I found the "Eurotrip" at 7:30 p.m. . It was a funny film .It says (that) there is a boy called Scotty who was cheating by his girlfriend and broke up on graduate party . She caressed with her new boyfriend on the stage of party .Scotty drank a lot of wine that night. He got dead drunk peeimg on bath towel belongs to his young brother. (不確定這一句)HA HA HA ~~~~~~~~~~~~ It's too much to say completely .I'm tired and shall go to sleep. Bye Bye Friday (May22, 2006)

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    After arriving home, I hung my schoolbag on the handgrip of room's door. I truned on my poor computer and ate dinner. God! It's seven o'clock now.

    Later, I searched for HBO to see program which I want to see today then I found the "Eurotrip" at 7:30 p.m. . It is a funny film .

    It say a boy who is cheating by his girlfriend and broke up on graduate party . She caressed with her new boyfriend on the stage of party .

    Scotty drank a lot of wine that night. He got dead drunk peeimg on bath towel belong to his young brother.

    HA HA HA ~~~~~~~~~~~~ It's too much to say completely .

    I'm tired going to sleep. Bye Bye

    May22/ Friday

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