我的英文心得哪裡有錯

Question

Mary loses the parents from her childhood. Her identity is strong. Her uncle takes care of her. But uncle is deformed. Mary and her friend chance to find blocked garden. Mary and her friend plant plants in the garden. The garden is full of life in the spring. Her uncle detects their secret. Mary learns cry. Her uncle become a elastic man.

請問哪些文法有錯，該什麼單字該替換掉

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瑪莉的雙親在他得小時候就已經去世了。因此，她的個性相當倔強。她從小由她就就照顧她。瑪莉和她朋友在偶然得機會下發現被舅舅封鎖的花園。她和她朋友種植植物在花園中。花園在春天充滿生機。她的舅舅發現了這個秘密。倔強的瑪莉學會到流淚。她的舅舅也在老婆死後的陰霾。

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Answer 1

最佳解答

Mary "lost" (因為是過去式）her parents when she was a child. Therefore, she has strong charater. Her uncle has been taking care of her ever since she was young. (因為從小就．．所以我推測現在還是) Mary and her friend once found a garden which was enclosed by her uncle by accident. ever since that, mary and her friend started to plant in the garden. The garden is so lively in spring. Her uncle found out this secret one day, and Mary learnt how to cry. 我不知道最後依據你想說的是什麼所以沒辦法幫你翻譯喔

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Answer 2

uncle is defromed 叔叔變形了 @@? 也許你把中文PO出來我們再幫你改比較快 =.="