Lynn 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請幫我修改英文作文~~~~有關”世界語言”

抱歉我的英文不太好,

句子的流暢度很差,

請大家幫我潤一下文章,

謝謝!!

(不好意思,

今天晚上八點前我就需要了)

English, the most important language all over the world, is becoming the universal language that we have to use. From the governmental news release we can see it by English at short intervals. Even the daily talk, we often use it at anytime. Moreover, the importance of learning English is spread to the non-English-speaking countries. Take the Taiwan for example. The students of fifth grades in the elementary school have started to learn the second language, English.

Why is English such an important international language? Perhaps it should trace back to big navigation time. With the reign of capitalism, it allowed millions of people to communicate. For this reason, we can realize why the situation will happen. Countless people move to English-speaking countries in order to study. Because the diploma is differ from the one which is got in non-English-speaking countries. No wonder the frequency of the one who goes abroad to study increases rapidly. Even it becomes fashionable. In addition, almost senior managers believe that the experiences of going abroad to study someone have is good in his working.

Studying English is the most popular thing presently. However, Chinese is springing up in recently decade year. Follow up the period of ten years, the new international language will be born. Chinese is the most possible one which may replace the English position in the world. Up to the day, all the things would change step by step.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    English, the most important language of the whole world, become the general language that we must use formally . We can see the government's news briefing through English in very short time . Including every day's talk, we often use it at any time. And, the importance to study English is passed to the country that does not speak English . Such as Taiwan. Fifth grade primary school students have already begun to study the second generation of language now, English. Why will English become so important international language? Perhaps it should trace back to big navigation time . Because of the governance of the capitalism, it allows millions of people to exchange. So, we can realize why the situation will take place . In order to study, countless people move the country that get and speak English. Do not speak the national diploma sent of English but label in English . What is no wonder goes abroad to study frequency runs up. In addition, the higher level manager believes that the experience that somebody goes abroad to study will make him do well in the course of job. Studying English became the most popular thing not long ago. However, Chinese have jumped over these ten years recently. Following the trail of for 10 years, the new international language will emerge. Chinese is one of the languages replacing English most possibly. Then, all thing one step of changes.

    我可是花了將近一個小時才幫你改好的呢!!

    2006-06-01 17:19:20 補充:

    抱歉忘了分段只好麻煩你看一下然後自己分囉!!

    2006-06-02 20:40:34 補充:

    呃...抱歉是[半]個小時,不是[一]個小時,不過我真的沒有要誇張的意思喔!!!

    2006-06-02 20:44:47 補充:

    而且,我說1個小時,

    是因為上面寫的是

    [剩23小時發問結束]

    所以我就直接用24去檢23囉!!

    參考資料: 非常認真回答的我~
  • 1 0 年前

    候選2較通順

    不過大概看了一下

    第一句

    English, the most important language in the world, is the universal language that we all must know how to use。

    要去掉it

    還有第二段最後一句中間

    of後應該要加動名詞

    with the experience of studying abroad

    建議作者在寫文章的時候主旨能一致

    前面講英文後面又提到中文

    會讓人有不知題目為何的混淆喔

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    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    English, the most important language in the world, it is the universal language that we all must know how to use. From political news to our daily conversation, we can see English every where. Moreover, the importance of learning English is to extend English learning to non-English-speaking countries. Take Taiwan for example. The fifth grade students now, all have to start learning the second language, English.

    Why is English such an important international language? Perhaps it should trace back to Europe’s colonialism period. With the reign of capitalism, it allowed millions of people to communicate. For this reason, we can understand why English is so important. Countless people move to English-speaking countries to study because the college diploma is more recognizable, which means more valuable than those from other countries. No wonder the number of people moving abroad to study increases rapidly, it even became a trend. In addition, most corporate managements believe that someone with the experience of study abroad can really assist them in their works.

    English is now the most popular language. However, Chinese is also becoming more popular in this recently decade. Give it another ten years or so, the new international language might be born. Chinese is the most potential language that might replace English's position in the world. Until that day, all things will change step by step

  • 1 0 年前

    To lily,

    謝謝你幫我修文章,

    不過離我發問還不到一小時你就回答了,

    怎麼會花你將近一小時的時間呢??

    (很納悶的我)

    2006-06-07 00:21:30 補充:

    很謝謝你們幫我修改文章

    只是點數只能送給一個人

    真是不好意思ㄋㄟ!!

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