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急~訂正英文作文..(看文法有沒有錯..文章順不順..)

Oops! It seems that I have been very down for a long time. Perhaps... one month! Everything tatolly goes wrong in these days. I think I really need 方法 to cheer myself up. But 不是每件事都這麼糟 . At least, Mom bought me a great pair of glasses.(That really excited me for at least one week!) All things I have to do is stop complaining and try my best to look everything on the bright side so that I may feel better.

拜託各位囉~^^

阿哩壓逗~

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  • 1 0 年前
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    Oops! It seems that I have been feeling very down for a long time. About one month! Everything goes wrong these days. I think I really need a way to cheer myself up. But not everything is so bad. At least Mom bought me a great pair of glasses. (This really excited me for at least one week!) The only thing I have to do is stop complaining and try my best to look on the brighter side of everything so that I may feel better.

  • 1 0 年前

    其實我英文不是很好,所以沒辦法幫你訂正全部,只知道大部分都不太順"

    但是我覺得方法可以用"way",整句的話,應該是"I need a way to…(do something)"

    還有"but不是每件事情都這麼糟",可以說"But not really everthing’s that worse "

    應該是這樣囉‵‵

    參考資料: 自己的brain
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