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警方開始懷疑是否是TOM的朋友想嫁禍給她而設計這個事件像是TOM作的。所以便開始著手調查他身邊的人,發現他有一名女友,名字叫JUDY,他們時常發生爭執,在一次的爭吵中TOM失手將JUDY毀容,於是TOM拋棄了他。

The police wonder to know that whether Tom’s friends, wants to impute him, design this events that seems like Tom did. So they start to investigate his friends and find he has a girlfriend who berates fight with him many times. They discovered Judy has a large scar on face that is Tom disfigured her mindless in an argument.

警方開始調查JUDY,並跟蹤他。發現他女友會三不五時在酒店門口排迴,當她男友再度帶著一名女子離開酒店時,女友一路尾隨,直到TOM到旅館。等候多時後,酒店小姐離開了旅館,JUDY隨及跟上,酒店小姐故意誘導她到一條死巷中,而當她要展開殺溽行動時,警方便出現,將她逮捕到案。

The police inquire and tail Judy. She constantly linger the public house that the bobby find out. When Tom departs from the public house with a bawd; Judy tags along them to the hotel. After a few minutes, the harlot leaves the hotel. Judy fallows her immediately. The harlot calculated lures her to a court. When Judy is starting to removal her; the police is appearing and apprehending her to the office.

據警方偵訊後發現了這個不為人知的故事。原來,Tom是個花心的男人,他經常上酒店尋歡,兩人時常為此發生爭執,在一次爭吵中,他失手將她毀容,並拋棄她。

On the basis of the police’s reconnoiter, they find an unknown story. Actually Tom is a playboy; he usually goes to the public house. Judy and Tom always argue for this event. After an accident, Tom is disfigured Judy and cease to be faithful.

Judy從此對酒店女子產生怨恨。只要跟Tom接觸過的酒店女子都會被殺害。自從她被毀容以後,就開始感到自卑,並認為她沒有酒店女子美麗,所以Tom才會拋棄她。她堅信只有把酒店女子美麗的容貌除去後,Tom便會回到她身邊。又是一樁愚蠢的愛情引來的殺機。

你相信當你沉醉在愛情中時的意識是清楚的嗎?誰知道?

From this time, Judy began enmity prostitutes. All of the harlots who contacts with Tom will be killed. Since she was disfigured, she felt inferior and thought she was not more beautiful than whores. She considered that whores caused that Tom separated her. She believes firmly that removes the harlot’s face of skin and Tom will return to her.

It is the intention to murder that a love of birdbrain leads again.

Do you convince that your conscious is clear when you fall in love? Who knows?

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    盡量在不失原文意思的情況下修改了一下

    感覺好像文章開始的有點突然

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    警方開始懷疑是否是TOM的朋友想嫁禍給她而設計這個事件像是TOM作的。所以便開始著手調查他身邊的人,發現他有一名女友,名字叫JUDY,他們時常發生爭執,在一次的爭吵中TOM失手將JUDY毀容,於是TOM拋棄了他。

    The police began to doubt whether Tom’s friends designed the events to impute Tom to be the criminal. So they started to investigate his friends and found he had a girlfriend, Judy. They quarreled often and one time Tom disfigured Judy after a serious quarrel and then Tom abandoned her.

    警方開始調查JUDY,並跟蹤他。發現他女友會三不五時在酒店門口排迴,當她男友再度帶著一名女子離開酒店時,女友一路尾隨,直到TOM到旅館。等候多時後,酒店小姐離開了旅館,JUDY隨及跟上,酒店小姐故意誘導她到一條死巷中,而當她要展開殺溽行動時,警方便出現,將她逮捕到案。

    The police inquired and tailed Judy. They found she usually lingered around the public house. When Tom departed from the public house with a bawd; Judy followed them to the hotel. After a few minutes, the harlot left the hotel and Judy followed her immediately. The harlot calculated lures her to a court. And when Judy tempted to kill the harlot; the police appeared and apprehended her to the office.

    據警方偵訊後發現了這個不為人知的故事。原來,Tom是個花心的男人,他經常上酒店尋歡,兩人時常為此發生爭執,在一次爭吵中,他失手將她毀容,並拋棄她。

    According to the police’s inquiry, they found this unknown story. Actually Tom is a playboy; he usually goes to the public house. Judy and Tom always argues for this. After a quarrel, Tom disfigured Judy and ceased to be faithful.

    Judy從此對酒店女子產生怨恨。只要跟Tom接觸過的酒店女子都會被殺害。自從她被毀容以後,就開始感到自卑,並認為她沒有酒店女子美麗,所以Tom才會拋棄她。她堅信只有把酒店女子美麗的容貌除去後,Tom便會回到她身邊。又是一樁愚蠢的愛情引來的殺機。

    你相信當你沉醉在愛情中時的意識是清楚的嗎?誰知道?

    From then on, Judy began to hate prostitutes. All of the harlots who had contacted with Tom were going to be killed. Since she was disfigured, she felt inferior and thought she was not as beautiful as the whores and that’s why Tom abandoned her. She thought firmly that after removing the beautiful faces of the harlots Tom would return to her.

    It is another intention to murder for silly love.

    Do you believe that your consciousness is clear when you fall in love? Who knows?

    參考資料: self
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