RuRU Lin 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

personal statement的範例

can you write some samples about personal statement


if i am good at English....umm...can you write some samples about your personal statement including school performance,special award

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  • 1 0 年前

    personal statement 基本上是用在求職或伸請研究所才需要的吧,基本上格式是固定的! 包括

    1.Introduction 2.Detailed Supporting Paragraphs 3.Conclusion


    As a child I often accompanied my father to his small coin shop and spent hours watching him work. When I was older, I sometimes set up displays, waited on customers, and even balanced the books. This experience instilled in me the desire to own and manage my own business someday, yet I understand that the business world today is more complex. This complexity requires more education, and with that in mind, I am applying to the Master's of Business Administration program at NEW YORK UNIVERSITY(NYU).

    In addition to my helping out in my father's business, I have had numerous other work experiences that further enhance my qualifications for this program. I have held at Kerasotes Theaters, Chili's restaurants, and University of Alberta's new Student Recreational Sports Center, and what all of these positions have in common is an emphasis on serving the public effectively. Both of these positions have allowed me to develop my sales and people skills, which are extremely important in an increasingly service-driven marketplace.

    My successful internship is one element of my overall academic success as an undergraduate here at IUB, yet I have also made time for a variety of extracurricular activities, including working for my sorority and competing in intramural basketball; furthermore, continuing my education here would allow me to make important business contacts, with the career goal of opening my own computer consulting firm in the Midwest.

    參考資料: self
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