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拜託大家了

我是個英文很爛的五專生.....

In recent years, when Taiwan suffers from the earthquake and typhoon, always has a serious problem-the debris flow. To be a Taiwanese, I think it is time that we might to solve this important natural calcmities.

Why is this natural calamities so serious? Taiwan has very steep and loose geology, and Taiwan people like to chew the betel nut so you can see the betel palm everywhere in Taiwan-even in the hillside. May be you will say: so what? The betel palm is a kind of plant, and plant can grasp the ground. The debris flow problem will be better, that is a good way to solve this natural calcmities! I will say: no! It\'s a misconception, the betel palm\'s root is short that can\'t grasp the ground. When typhoon and downpour coming, the ground can\'t absorbent heavy rain. The ground will be soft and loose, and the mud and stone glide to submontane, the debris flow will happen. Also, Taiwanese like to build the cottage home on hill side, like the betel palm, this behavior will accelerated debris flow.

Before the decade, Taiwan people didn\'t know how the debris flow will be critically that will their safety. But after typhoon, earthquake and downpour attack our hillside and we suffer the debris flow-some people dead in the debris flow. They cover up under the earth, this natural calamities are very terrible, doesn\'t it?

How should we solve this natural calamities? First, even it\'s too late to tree planting, I still think we might plant more trees on the hillside. Those trees can help us to do the soil and water conservation will. Taiwan\'s farmer also need to make a plan what they plant on the hillside. Is the ground adaption to plant? Is this cropper can grasp the ground? Maybe it\'s a stupid idea that will let then lose some money, but lose money or lose life, who wants to lose life?

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And there are lots of problem in the world, like: Greenhouse Effect, Air Pollution, Endangered Species of Wild Fauna and Flora, World Energy…those problem in every country in the beautiful globe, so we can't just know how those natural calamities so serious and danger to our life.

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We must do something that can help us solve these problem, and return us good country and life like before.

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For example: in the summer, we can use an electric fan or we can use the electric fan with the air conditioning. When we buy refrigerator, we can choose to the eco- refrigerant one. Besides, we also can take public transportation, not drive alone.

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Maybe you think these things are not important and waste your time, but don't you think if everybody does that will be very useful?

以上補充為一段....=.=

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I don't know how you feel about this world. But for me, I love my country and this world especially Africa and going there is my dream. So I hope we can solve those natural calcmities and have better life, after all, we only have one earth.

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  • Helen
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    1 0 年前
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    In recent years, Taiwan suffers from earthquakes and typhoons, and always follows a serious problem-the debris flow. Being a Taiwanese, I think it is time that we should solve these important natural calcmities.

    Why are this natural calamities so serious? Taiwan has a very steep and loose geology, and Taiwan people like to chew the betel nut so you can see betel palms everywhere in Taiwan-even on the hillside. May be you will say, "So what? The betel palm is a kind of plant, and plants can grasp the ground. The debris flow problem will be better, that is a good way to solve this natural calcmity!" I will say, "No! It's a misconception, the betel palm's root is so short that it can't grasp the ground. When typhoon and downpour comes, the ground can't absorb heavy rain. The ground will be soft and loose, and when the mud and stone glides to submontane, the debris flow will happen. Also, Taiwanese like to build the cottage homes on the hill side, like the betel palm, this behavior will accelerate debris flow.

    Before this decade, Taiwan people didn't know how the debris flow will be critical to their safety. But after typhoon, earthquake and downpour attack our hillside and we suffer from the debris flow-some people even died in it. They were covered under the earth, these natural calamities are very terrible, aren't they?

    How should we solve these natural calamities? First, even though it's too late to plant trees, I still think we should plant more trees on the hillside. Those trees can help us do the soil and water conservation. Taiwan's farmer also need to make a plan on what they plant on the hillside. Is the ground adaptive to plant? Is this crop able to grasp the ground? Maybe it's a stupid idea that will let them lose some money, but to lose money or to lose life, who wants to lose life?

    2006-06-08 16:16:04 補充:

    字數超過........還有需要請寄信到我的信箱我收到你的信箱後會回信給你

    2006-06-08 21:23:01 補充:

    And there are lots of problems in the world, like: Greenhouse Effect, Air Pollution, Endangered Species of Wild Fauna and Flora, World Energy…(those problem in every country in the beautiful globe, so we can't just know how those natural calamities so serious and danger to our life.)←不懂

    2006-06-08 21:23:52 補充:

    We must do something that can help us solve these problems, and return us a good country and life like before. For example: in the summer, we can use an electric fan or use the electric fan with the air conditioning. When we buy a refrigerator, we can choose the eco- refrigerant one.

    2006-06-08 21:24:17 補充:

    Besides, we can also take public transportation, not driving alone. Maybe you think these things are not important and waste your time, but don't you think if everybody does that, it will be very useful?

    2006-06-08 21:24:41 補充:

    I don't know how you feel about this world. But for me, I love my country and this world, especially Africa, and going there is my dream. So I hope we can solve these natural calcmities and have a better life After all, we only have one earth.

    2006-06-08 21:26:21 補充:

    你的信箱沒有開放....我也還沒有達到可以字體變色的程度所以要請你對照我改過的這些了.......抱歉

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