The third person is Ruby (The first owner’s wife of Ruby Pier). She tells Eddlie something about his father. Because his father is always very rigorous to him, but Ruby lets Eddlie to know different part of his father, and hopes Eddlie can forgive him.
The fourth person is his wife-Marguerite, the only lover in his whole life. She died early, Eddlie was very sad, he thought his life without her was no more meaning, and anything was not important. He looks like walking corpse. But Marguerite tells him “Life has to end. Love, doesn’t”
The last person is Tala. the girl who died from the fire during the war. Let Eddlie to understand his real existence of meaning. Even though a small maintain worker, also has existent meaning.
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*She tells Eddie something about his father----> She told Eddie about his father.
His father was very rigorous to him, but Ruby let Eddlie see a different side of his father, and hoped Eddlie could forgive him.
Because 跟 But 同為連接詞, 不會用在同一個句子裡
*She died early, Eddlie was very sad--->建議可改為:
Eddie was very sad when she passed away. 雖有可能與原意不盡相同,但較為通順
*he thought his life without her was no more meaning, and anything was not important.
----->He thought life was meaningless without her. Nothing seemed to matter/ be important any more.
*He looks like walking corpse.----> He was like a walking corpse without his soul.
*Let Eddlie to understand his real existence of meaning--->
Tala made Eddie realize the true meaing of his existence in this world.
*Even though a small maintain worker, also has existent meaning. --->
Even as little as a maintainance worker in the amusement park plays an important role in keeping people safe.
Accidents do happen if the maintaince works are not done properly.
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