☻艾比文 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫我gramma check!(急件)

我的mass communication課的assignment

講師要我們perfect english!!

所以想請你們幫幫忙

我的assignment是關於media fast

意思是我要斷絕all the mass media 24 hours n write abt it

需要introduction, answers for 4 questions and conclusion!

問題在這裡-

a) were some media easier to avoid than others? which one? why?

b) identify at least two functions that mass media fulfill in ur life. how did u compensate for this lack during ur fast?

c) were there any social consequences of avoiding the media? what were they? for exam, were u unable to join in conversations about events that u missed in the news? how did ur world change?

d)how did this experiment affect u mentally? for example, did u miss some media more than others? were u bored without media? were u anxious abt missing information? were u relieved abt saving time to do other things? did u hav to change ur behaviour to avoid the media? how?

download here - http://www.geocities.com/psychoreppi/ASSIGNMENT1.d...

如果有舌麼你想要add on的話 welcome!! =)

謝謝!!!!!!!!!!

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但是那是講師出的問題

我要gramma check的是我的assignment

which download here - http://www.geocities.com/psychoreppi/ASSIGNMENT1.d...

3 個解答

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  • 1 0 年前

    i dun hav tutoring center in my school. i think i'll try to look for my lecturer. thank u very much anyway!

  • 1 0 年前

    a)were some media easier to avoid than others = if there were some media easier to avoid than others?

    用were的話是去if之後的were的倒裝句或是等於if there were

    有與現在事實不符的意味。

    Were Judita a better student, she would have a better relationship with her instructors.

    事實)Judita不是一個好學生,她和教授者沒有好的關系。

    所以你的口氣好像是說,事實上沒有某些大眾媒體比較好避開……

    建議使用

    if there are

    b) identify at least two functions that mass media fulfill in ur life. how did u compensate for this lack during ur fast?

    指出最少二個大眾媒體在我們生活中所發揮的功能。你怎麼彌補這個需求,當你在(逃避媒體)的這段時間……

    How to meet those demands during the period to keep away from the mass media?

    除非你確定fast可以這樣用……好像用在宗教上比較多吧。

    參考資料: 自已 托益825分
  • 1 0 年前

    dont you have tutoring centor in your school? Have them check your grammar will be better choice for a perfect english assignment.

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