★雞爪★ 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

可以麻煩大家幫我檢查我的英文讀書計畫嗎??拜託!!

Before entering the university:

1.I will read more foreign literature books and listen English broadcast. It can improve my reading and listening ability.

2.I will go to cram school to improve my English ability.

3.I want to find a part-time job. Not only can I earn some money but also I can learn some experience.

Being a freshman:

I will schedule my study time and try to pass the GEPT intermediate test.

Being a sophomore:

I will attend many kinds of classes and participate in school’s club.

Being a junior:

I will make a study tour abroad to improve my ability in speaking English.

Being a senior:

I will study hard to pass all the tests and smooth graduation. Maybe I will prepare to pursue a higher degree in the same subject.

In the future:

Seeing the global environment that changes over time, I have set up a goal for myself is to be able to work in an international organization or to be an interpreter as my job. Therefore, I believe that my goal will be reached as long as I do my best.

P.S.如果有看到文法錯誤或用字不好的地方~可以幫我做修正嗎??

非常感謝了!!為了怕有人不懂我要講的意思,我把中文打在下面~

可以邊看中文邊看我寫的可不可以~麻煩大家了!!

中文版:

進大學前:

1.我會多讀一些外國文學書和收聽英文廣播.這可加強我的閱讀能力和聽力

2.我會去補英文來增強我的英文能力

3.我想要去打工.不但能賺一些錢,也能獲取社會經驗

大一時:

我會好好計畫我的讀書時間和努力通過全民英檢中級

大二時:

我會嘗試多種選修課程,參與社團活動

大三時:

我會爭取赴英當交換學生,增強口說能力

大四時:

認真讀書通過所有考試並且順利的畢業.或許我會準備深造拿到更高學位

在未來:

看到這幾年全球環境的改變,我把自己的目標設在能在國際機構工作或者

成為一位以翻譯為工作的翻譯員.因此,我相信我能達成我的目標只要我

盡力而為.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Before entering to the university:

    1.I will read more foreign (literatures) and listen to English broadcast.

    It can improve my reading and listening (abilities).

    2.I will go to (tutoring) school to improve my English.

    3.I want to find a part-time job. (That can help me to make some income and also helping me to gain some self-experience.)

    Being a freshman:

    I will (arrange daily study schedule) and try (my best) to pass the GEPT intermediate test.

    Being a sophomore:

    I will attend(to different kind ) of (courses) and participate in school's club.

    Being a junior:

    I will make a study tour abroad to improve my ability in speaking (in )English.

    Being a senior:

    I will study hard to pass all the tests and (graduated smoothly). Maybe I will prepare to pursue a higher degree in (my major).

    In the future:

    Seeing the global environment that changes over time, (My goal is to) be able to work in an international organization or to be an interpreter.

    Therefore, I believe that ( I can reached my goal ) as long as I have try my best (to obtain a position where I can utilize my full credential skills and excellent interpersonal skills.)

    2006-06-17 18:20:54 補充:

    ( ) 裡面是我幫你修正的,我沒改變你的寫法,因如果是學校功課,你會被發現不是你自己寫的,而且這樣改你應該會學的比較快,而且你寫的大部份都對阿~所以這樣你才知道哪裡要改進..

    2006-06-17 18:21:56 補充:

    先祝你越來越進步

    參考資料: 自己
  • T40
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    我把你的中文計畫,以英文 ' 改寫 '。我不用翻譯,意思在給你個不同的思考方向,直接用英文來表達,而不是弄成二手英文。請包涵。英文習作,應練習直接以英語來思考,表達,才不會有勉強的感覺。

    Before starting college...

    1. I plan on a two-pronged apporach to improve my English; start from doing a few intensive readings (深度閱讀)to enhance my reading comprehension while listening more of the English broadcasting programs to help with the listening comprehension.

    2. To attend one of the English enhancement programs offered at some cram school.

    3. Working part time to gain some real world experience on top of making a few bucks.

    The freshman year...

    Set my study plan with the goal of getting the intermediate-level certificate of the GEPT.

    As a sophomore...

    Pick up courses covering a variety of subjects. In addition, the extracurricular activies are not to be left out.

    Being a junior...

    Going abroad to an English speaking country as an exchange student to help further my ability to converse in English is the prime goal.

    In senior year,

    Concentrate on the courseworks, pass all exams, and graduate!!! I'll probably think about studying abroad for an advanced degree now.

    Into the future...

    With the rapid globalization of everything at sight, I'd imagine that working in a multinational institution would make an excellent career choice, with professional interpreter being a close second, or vice versa. I'm confident I'll make either of my career goal a reality, because I'm going to give my best for it.

    試著讀幾遍,看看是不是仍合你的原意。文中使用了許多不同的句型,目的在幫你瞭解如何以英文思考方式來表達,同時也希望能刺激你把所學過的英文拿出來練習。

    並不是所有的英文都從 ' I ' 開始。這篇文章所有的句子都是以你的角度來出發,但不到一半是以 ' I ' 開始的。有趣吧。。。

    ' Intensive reading ' vs ' extensive reading '; you have to best yourself in the former before it make sense for you to try the latter. (先精讀幾本書,讀通了,再作廣泛的閱讀才有用。)

    some cram school - a yet to be determined cram school, not some number of cram schools.

    希望對你有幫助。

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