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The short-term plan

In order to keep up with the world and get more knowledge, I will read more articles in newspaper and magazines. Furthermore, I will advance my computer skills and basic commercial sense to get myself ready to be a fresh man in university.

The mid-term plan

I will spend most of my time on school subject, and I want to learn Japanese or France as my second foreign language. Because I think it is not enough to master in English alone. The more languages I am good at, the better chance I will have. Besides, I will join in a school club and take part in English activities as many as possible, to expand the good interpersonal relationships actively. Moreover, I also want to take courses in computer and commerce, for it will helpful in my future.

The long-term plan

After graduating, I will continue my study by going to graduate school or going abroad for further study to broaden my horizons. I hope I could find a job which is related to what I learn, and become a person who is specialized in this field.

I strong believe that National Taipei University of Technology is my best choice to make real my goal. I hope I will be lucky enough to pass the interview and be admitted to your esteemed school. Perhaps there are some aims too high in my study plan or to humble myself, please don’t grudge criticizing, giving me your comments and I am willing to take advices modestly. Thank you.

大大謝謝啦~~這是即將推甄的資料!!禮拜日之前要全部完成!!

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    修改如下:××× means cancelled words, red letters are those what I add on The short-term planIn order to keep up with the tide of the world and learn more knowledge, I will read more articles from newspapers and magazines. Furthermore, I will enhance my computer skills and basic commercial common sense. I hope to get myself ready to be a freshman in university.The mid-term planI will spend most of my time on school subject, and I want to extend my learning in Japanese or France as my second foreign language. Because I think nowadays it is not enough to be familiar with master in English alone. The more languages I am good at, the better chance I will shall have. Besides, I will join in a school club association and take part in English related activities many as long as I can. This is also a good way to expand the good my social & interpersonal relationships with others, I think. actively. Moreover, I also want would like to take the courses in of computer and commerce, for because it will be helpful in for my future.The long-term planAfter graduating, I will continue my study by going re-entering my graduated school or going abroad for further study education, to and broaden my horizons field of vision. Finally, I hope I could find a job which is related to what I have learnt, and become a person who is specialized proficient in this field.I strongly believe that National Taipei University of Technology is my best choice to make real come true my goal. I hope I will be lucky enough to pass the interview and be admitted into your esteemed school. Perhaps there are some aims of my study plan are too high in my study plan or to humble myself unrealistic, please don’t grudge criticizing feel free to let me know your point of view, giving me your comments and I am willing to take advices modestly. Your comments will be highly appreciated. Thank you.

    2006-06-15 15:51:03 補充:

    註解:

    common sense (片語 phrase) 常識

    as long as (片語 phrase) 只要

    further education (片語phrase) 繼續教育

    field of vision (片語 phrase) 視野

    proficient in (片語 phrase) 精通

    come true (片語 phrase) 實現

    point of view (片語 phrase) 觀點

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