劈哩郵俠 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請問英文文法上的問題~請幫我改正~謝謝!

自撰作文的部分擷取,標題是\"How to learn from my own mistakes?\"

以下句子如有錯誤還懇請改正~拜託了!

非常感激!

1.(前略).....why did we make mistake?

what\'s wrong with us? It just because of that we have not be familiar to a thing, or any problem esle?

Thirdly, trying to solve the problem that we brought up after we make mistakes.

(第三點, 盡力去解決因為我們犯錯所帶來的問題)

2.(前略)....What is the most important is: To obtain more knowledge concerned the mistake in ordfer to improve our view thinking, and NEVER make the same mistakes again.

(中文翻譯不久後補充)

謝謝!!!

2 個解答

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    1. 介係詞之後不可直接接上that子句 加上the fact當作介係詞的受詞

    或者直接將 of that省略

    What's wrong with us? It is just because (of THE FACT that) we have not be familiar with the thing or any problem esle?

    Thirdly, trying to solve the problem that we brought up after we make mistakes.

    2. and那一句少了主詞吧!? 用法:be concerned about或者直接改成concerning(介)

    What is the most important is: To obtain more knowledge concerned ABOUT the mistake in order to improve our view thinking, and WE NEVER make the same mistakes again

    參考資料: 高中英文老師
  • 1 0 年前

    不才之想法,請參考,有錯請不吝指正。1. What's wrong with us?  Is it just because we have not familiar with the thing, or any problem else?2. The most important is: To obtain more knowledge concerned the mistake in order to improve our thoughts, and NEVER make the same mistakes again.

    參考資料: me & Yahoo字典
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