123 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫我改一小段的英文.謝謝.(不要翻譯軟體!!)

承: 獎勵或賄賂策略對小孩而言,可能會讓孩子認為有好處才值得去做,而不是發自內心或覺得這是他們的義務。一般而言,小孩應該培養他們自動自發的能力,而不是要用物質方面的東西來引誘他們。一般的家長都習慣用賄賂的方式來獎勵小孩,但這會使他們的心態偏差,認為他們有權利去選擇做或不做。因此,在學習方面就很容易養成懶惰的心態,而且無法學習到正確的觀念。

Reward and bribe are let children think it will have advantages, so they want to do something. And it’s not their volunteer or they think it’s a duty. In general, children should cultivate their hardworking ability, and it’s not to use material things to attract them. Some parents like to use bribe to reward their children. But it will let their children’s pulse is not correct, and the children will think they can choose “do” or “not to do”. Therefore, in children learning, they will keep a lazy pulse, and they can’t to learn correct idea.

這是我寫的一段英文翻譯.麻煩英文好的大大幫我改順一點嘿.

我翻的不是很好.麻煩大家幫忙看哪裡有錯的地方.

中翻英.謝謝...

幫我翻順一點...

我不接受翻譯軟體翻的東西哦...!!!!

已更新項目:

上面的承沒什麼意思..從獎勵開始改即可.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Rewarding and bribing might encourage children to perform a task without their

    own willingness; they might be more interested what they would be benefited

    rather than what they would learn. In general, children should be taught to be

    more self motivated and should not be misled by any material rewards.

    Most of the parents would offer rewards to encourage their children to do things;

    in return, children would think that they can choose “to do” or “not to do”

    based on what they would benefit from them. In result, it would discourage

    children to learn correct ideas in their learning progress.

    我沒照中文直翻因語法與用法不同

    但大意是一樣的

    你參考一下吧

    參考資料: 自己 and everyday life
  • Sam
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    獎勵或賄賂策略對小孩而言,可能會讓孩子認為有好處才值得去做,

    To children, rewards and briberies might serve as advantage goals,

    而不是發自內心或覺得這是他們的義務。

    and while working on somethings, they will not work through their heart intention or be felt as their responsibilities.

    一般而言,小孩應該培養他們自動自發的能力,

    In general, children should be tought and cultivated through their own initiatives,

    而不是要用物質方面的東西來引誘他們。

    and not be persuaded or seduced through material rewards.

    一般的家長都習慣用賄賂的方式來獎勵小孩,

    Most parents used to use briberies as encouragements to their kids or children,

    但這會使他們的心態偏差,

    this will utlimately deviate their mentalities,

    認為他們有權利去選擇做或不做。

    thinking that they have the absolute rights to do or not to do a certain thing.

    因此,在學習方面就很容易養成懶惰的心態,

    As such, they become lazy or complecent in their learning,

    而且無法學習到正確的觀念。

    and finally are unable to obtain the correct concept or philosophy.

  • 1 0 年前

    Rewards and bribes will let children think its will have advantages, so they would like to do anything to get them, and it's not they are volunteers or they think it's a duty. In general, children should activate their hard working abilities, and shouldn't use any materials to attract their attention. With attractions, children's paulse will not be right, and they will think that they can choose "to do" or "not to do". Therefore, in the learning of children, they will need to keep a lazy pulse, and they can't learn any correct ideas.

    參考資料: Me ( from Canada)
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