Richard 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請幫我的造句改錯改用字方法,文法......

1.Incorrect thought will cause you to do deviation behavior.

不正確的思想會造成你的行為偏差(will cause....to 一定要)

2.Driving with yours mind wondering will result in traffic accident.

開車分神會造成交通事故(will result in一定要在句中)

3.Due to the fact that people always like others lick theirs boots, so sycophant always easily be promoted.

由於事實上人都喜歡別人拍馬屁,所以阿諛者比較容易升遷(Due to the fact that一定要在開頭)

4.911 terrifying strike seriously effect the air security of USA. As a result , USA have conflict on the interests between Middle East country so they harbour hatred to avenge.

911恐怖攻擊嚴重影響美國飛航安全. 由於美國和中東國家有利益上的衝突所以挾怨報復

(As a result 一定要,以複詞子句型態)

5.Due to he always tells a lie , his classmate doesn\'t believe what he boasts.

由於他老是說謊 , 他的同學都不相信他的吹噓(Due to 一定要並在句首)

6.I missed the bus and consequently was late to school.

我錯過巴士結果上學遲到了

(consequently 在句中)

7.He didn\'t go to mid-term examination as a result of he was sick.

由於生病他沒考期中考(as a result of 在句中)

8.Take drugs will damage your mind and body, causing your mind and body to lost control.

吸毒將損害你身心,造成身心失去控制.(causing ...to 在句中)

2006-06-17 16:19:45 補充

其實只是造句,中文是我照造句翻來的,有錯也請不吝賜教

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Incorrect thought will cause you to (have) deviation behavior.

    deviation behavior是一種個性 所以用have比較妥當

    Driving with your mind wandering around will result in traffic accident.

    Due to the fact that baseball is the most popular sport in Taiwan, many children wants to become a professional baseball player.

    基於棒球在台灣是最受歡迎的運動,很多小孩長大後都希望當職業選手

    The 911 terrorist attack seriously affected(這是動詞,不能用effect) the air security of U.S.A. As a result, U.S.A has improved their security check at the airport.

    我把你的句子簡化了一點

    911恐怖攻擊嚴重的影響了美國飛安安全, 因此 美國加強了在機場的安全檢查.

    Due to he always tells a lie 文法不對

    Due to the large amount of lies he told before, his classmates don't believe what he says.

    因為他講了太多的謊話, 他的同學都不相信他說的話

    你第五句是不式從奇魔字典超出來的= = 不過應該OK

    He didn't go to his mid-term examination, as a result, he failed his test

    as a result適用在結果 並不是原因

    例如 他沒有去考試, 所以他不及格 並不能用來解釋他為什麼沒考試

    Taking drugs will damage your mind and body by causing them to lose control

    可以湊成一句喔!有問題請補充

  • 1 0 年前

    1.Incorrect thought will cause you to do deviation behavior.

    不正確的思想會造成你的行為偏差(will cause....to 一定要)

    ~~ 我ㄉ翻法: Incorrect way of thinking will cause you to misbehave.

    2.Driving with yours mind wondering will result in traffic accident.

    開車分神會造成交通事故(will result in一定要在句中)

    ~~我ㄉ翻法: Distraction while driving will result in traffic accident.

    3.Due to the fact that people always like others lick theirs boots, so sycophant always easily be promoted.

    由於事實上人都喜歡別人拍馬屁,所以阿諛者比較容易升遷(Due to the fact that一定要在開頭)

    ~~我ㄉ翻法: Due to the fact that everyone likes to be flattered, so people who flatter others get promoted more easily.

    4.911 terrifying strike seriously effect the air security of USA. As a result , USA have conflict on the interests between Middle East country so they harbour hatred to avenge.

    911恐怖攻擊嚴重影響美國飛航安全. 由於美國和中東國家有利益上的衝突所以挾怨報復(As a result 一定要,以複詞子句型態)

    ~我ㄉ翻法: America and Mid-eastern countries have conflict on the aspect of interest.

    As a result, people believe that mid-eastern countries take revenge on America by affecting America's flight security, like the September 11 Incident.

    5.Due to he always tells a lie , his classmate doesn't believe what he boasts.

    由於他老是說謊 , 他的同學都不相信他的吹噓(Due to 一定要並在句首)

    ~我ㄉ翻法: Due to constant lying, his classmates never believe him when he brags about himself.

    6.I missed the bus and consequently was late to school.

    我錯過巴士結果上學遲到了(consequently 在句中)

    ~~我ㄉ翻法: I missed the bus, and consequently I was late for school.

    7.He didn't go to mid-term examination as a result of he was sick.

    由於生病他沒考期中考(as a result of 在句中)

    ~~我ㄉ翻法: He missed his midterm test as a result of his sickness.

    8.Take drugs will damage your mind and body, causing your mind and body to lost control.

    吸毒將損害你身心,造成身心失去控制.(causing ...to 在句中)

    ~~我ㄉ翻法: Taking drungs will demage you mentally and physically, causing you to lose your own control over your mind and body.

    你參考依下~~我覺得那樣比較正確

    參考資料: 主修英文系~現在為英文老師
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