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我的英文真的是爛的可以,為了工作已經努力把他弄出一個形了,麻煩大家幫我修改的通順一點或文法奇怪的地方,謝謝 Autobiography My name is Peila. I was born in Yun Ling. There are 5 people in my family. Both of my parents work in agriculture. I graduated from kun sun university technology majored in Business Management. During the four years, I studied hard in the... 顯示更多 我的英文真的是爛的可以,為了工作已經努力把他弄出一個形了,麻煩大家幫我修改的通順一點或文法奇怪的地方,謝謝

Autobiography
My name is Peila. I was born in Yun Ling. There are 5 people in my family. Both of my parents work in agriculture.

I graduated from kun sun university technology majored in Business Management. During the four years, I studied hard in the professional subject of Service Management、Strategic Management、Quality Management etc, Because I know they are very useful tools and I was interested in them.
In my time out of class, I also do some early and learn a lot from the experiences of getting along with people. These will be very helpful to my future career. Also I learned a lot of experiences from a part-time job. Even though the job was only a runner. I worked hard for it .I used to work hard because there are so many customers. From this little job, I have learned the idea of achieving a project and experienced it.

I am earnest and energetic person, and I am confident about the works on my test. Thank you for your precious time that spent on reading my autobiography. It would most be my pleasure to service in your company,and I work hard for it.
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