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誰能幫我修飾這篇灰姑娘的英文話劇稿..... 20點喔

這是我的英文話劇稿的一部分

有些不會翻.有些可能文法上錯誤

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Aside:The festival is coming, the sisters are very excited.

Sister(彥宏):Hey, sister, the festival is beginning. We should go there earlier.

Cinderella:Can I go with them, stepmother?

Stepmother:No, you can’t. You can’t dance, and then you have to clean the house.

Aside:Cinderella is sad, because she expects it for a long time. Soon, a fairy comes to help her.

Fairy:Cinderella, do you want to go to the festival? I can make you wish.

Aside:Soon, there is a beautiful dress, and glass high heels on the floor.

Then, she wears them and she becomes a beautiful girl.

Cinderella:I’m so glad that I can see the prince and dance with him.

Prince:Hey!That pretty girl can you dance with me?

Cinderella:Sure, I can.

Aside:Cinderella and prince dance for a long time.

Prince:Can you tell me your name and where you come from?

Aside:Cinderella wants to tell him, but she is afraid of her stepmother.

Cinderella:Sorry! I have to go home.

Prince:Hey! Wait…….

Aside:One of her high heel slides on the step, when she runs to the steps. But she worries very much. So she doesn’t pick it up.

Cinderella:幸好姐姐們還沒回來。I have to clean the house quickly.

Aside:Since the dance is over, the prince misses Cinderella every day.

Prince:Followers, go to find the high heel’s owner.

Followers:Yes!

Aside:Followers try to find the owner.

Follower:This is the last house.(They go into Cinderella’s home)

Sister:Cinderella, 你先試穿吧!反正你也不會是王子要找的人!

Followers:Hey!這位小姐你就是我要找的那位公主了.

Aside:The prince is very glad that he finds the high heel’s owner.

Prince:小姐請跟我們回宮殿吧!

Sisters:Cinderella, you can’t go with the prince.

Prince:你們二個不要妨礙他,讓他做決定.

Cinderella:Okay! I will go with you.

Aside:仙德蕾拉從此以後過著幸福快樂的生活。

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    Aside:The festival was coming, thetwo sisters were very excited.

    Sister(彥宏):Hey, sister, the festival is start We should go there early.

    Cinderella:Can I go with them, step-mother?

    Stepmother:No, you can’t. You can’t dance, and you have to clean the house then.

    Aside:Cinderella was sad, because she expected it for a long time. Soon, a fairy came to help her.

    Fairy:Cinderella, do you want to go to the festival? I can make your dream come true.

    Aside:Soon, there was a beautiful dress, and glass high heels on the floor.

    Then, she put on them and she became a beautiful girl.

    Cinderella:I’m so glad that I will see the prince and dance with him.

    Prince:Hey!The pretty girl, do you want to dance with me?

    Cinderella:Sure, I do.

    Aside:Cinderella and prince danced for a while.

    Prince:Can you tell me your name and where are you come from?

    Aside:Cinderella wanted to tell him, but she was afraid of her stepmother.

    Cinderella:Sorry! I have to leave

    Prince:Hey! Wait…….

    Aside:One of her high heels left on the step, when she rans to the steps. But she worried very much. So she didn't pick it up.

    Cinderella:Lucky, sisters haven't come back yet.I have to clean the house quickly.

    Aside:Since the dance was over, the prince miss Cinderella every day.

    Prince:Fellows, go to find the high heel’s owner.

    Followers:Yes!

    Aside:Followers tried to find the high heel’s owner

    Follower:This is the last house.(They go into Cinderella’s home)

    Sister:Cinderella, you try first!becuase you won't be the person who want

    Followers:Hey!this lady the princess who i am searching for.

    Aside:The prince was very glad that he found the high heel’s owner.

    Prince:My Lady, please return to the palace with me

    Sisters:Cinderella, you can’t go with the prince.

    Prince:hey!you two do not interupt her, let her make the decision.

    Cinderella:Okay! I will go with you.

    Aside:After that, Cinderalle had a very happy life with her Prince。

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