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拜託幫忙檢查我的英文自傳.語法.文法及哪裡需要改進(20點)

First, describes

the itself individuality open and bright, lively natural, easy to be together is a completely talkative person, in the association activity I is a leader; Works has the patience, has the sense of responsibility, earnestly achieves the acme of perfection to the matter to belong to the motion faction is carefully my merit, the relatives and friends, schoolmate, division commanders all identically likes with the appreciation; Reads each article books, likes the outdoors to move for example: The picnic, the swimming, plays the basketball, the baseball, processes, Word, Excel, the receiving and dispatching email regarding the common copy clerk is the specialty also is individual interest, the modern people contacts outside each other except the telephone, is most generally the academic society computer is the indispensable necessary tool.

Second, the self-profession plans

the self-arrangement to test some cards according to, the increase ability performance, although at present only has in the room to match the line second grade, the third class card according to, the alpha electrician, fatigue An Yuan graduates the certificate and so on, at present will be preparing the register grade B freezing air conditioning card according to, also and was admitted to a school grade B fatigue An Yuanzheng using the time to illuminate. At present studies the life-long study student who receives the computer capital training class! Unceasingly will strive the oneself specialized knowledge, enriches oneself and studies other language ability using the neutral gear time. Grasps consults modestly studies any business, and learns through practice anytime and anywhere, enables the study to have the development, the display space, the entire heart will invest the enterprise sprint is with all one\'s strength later the goal makes great strides forward for me, the advance.

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ㄧ、自我描述

本身個性開朗、活潑大方、容易相處是個滿健談的人,在團體活動中我可是個領導者;做事有耐心、細心具有責任感、對事情認真做到盡善盡美屬於行動派是我優點,親友、同學、師長都一致喜愛與讚賞;二、自我之生涯規劃

自我安排考一些證照、增加能力表現,雖然目前只持有室內配線乙、丙級證照、甲種電匠、勞工安全衛生管理員結業證書等,目前正準備報考乙級冷凍空調證照、也將利用時間ㄧ並考取乙級勞工安全衛生管理員證照。目前還是學承電腦資訓班的終生學習學員!將不斷精進自己專業知識、多充實自己及利用空檔時間學習其它語言能力。

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    1 0 年前
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    自我描述

    本身個性開朗、活潑大方、容易相處是個滿健談的人,在團體活動中我可是個領導者;做事有耐心、細心具有責任感、對事情認真做到盡善盡美屬於行動派是我優點,親友、同學、師長都一致喜愛與讚賞;

    Self-Introduction:

    I am an open-minded, easy going, and get along with people quickly. In the group activity, I am a leader. As I am patient and responsible doing things and try to make all things be done perfectly, all my friends, relatives, and teachers are appreciating me.

    自我之生涯規劃

    自我安排考一些證照、增加能力表現,雖然目前只持有室內配線乙、丙級證照、甲種電匠、勞工安全衛生管理員結業證書等,目前正準備報考乙級冷凍空調證照、也將利用時間ㄧ並考取乙級勞工安全衛生管理員證照。目前還是學承電腦資訓班的終生學習學員!將不斷精進自己專業知識、多充實自己及利用空檔時間學習其它語言能力。

    Self Career Planning

    I have arranged to take some licensees to improve my ability performance. Even though I only hold the licenses of the 2nd and 3rd grade Indoor Wire-Matching, the first grade electrician, and the certificate of labor safety and sanitary administrator. Currently, I am preparing for the license of the 2nd grade freezing air conditioning and try my best to find time for the license of the 2nd grade labor safety and sanitary administrator. Actually, I am the life student of 學承Computer Information Class. I shall continue sharpening my professional knowledge, fulfilling myself and learning other languages in my free time.

  • 1 0 年前

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