急!請幫我修改這段英文自傳~(贈20點)

I have a dream. My dream is to travel abroad. As everybody knows, English is the global language. I think learning it well is a must to travel abroad smoothly, and that the reason why I want study here ; I understand propagation of new information in English mostly, if I could learn it more, I’ll be close to the... 顯示更多 I have a dream. My dream is to travel abroad. As everybody knows, English is the global language. I think learning it well is a must to travel abroad smoothly, and that the reason why I want study here ; I understand propagation of new information in English mostly, if I could learn it more, I’ll be close to the earth village deeply. Most country that I love is U.S.A; the reason is how much I love her culture, for example, her music sounds attractable; I enjoy drinking Coke Cola, too. It is a needy in hot summer. When talking about the America culture, you can\'t miss the jeans, almost everyone in it as basically! Do you like go out in jeans? I think you are the one of most people!
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可以盡快幫我修改嗎?
我等等就要拿去輸出了
明天學校就要收齊
但我現在沒有辦法去學校找老師
只好上來請求各位高手的協助
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