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可以幫我改英文作文嗎

我有篇英文作文

想請大家幫我改

但我本身並非很厲害

所以希望能有人幫我看一下

題目:暑假將至,如何規劃暑假?

summer vacation is around the corner,many students are looking forward to its coming,and i`m no exception.before being a freshman,i want to do some meaningful thing,enriching my experience. i plan to do part-time jod during yhe summer vacation.

being a singer is my dream.i like singing,bringing joys to others.therefore,i plan to apply for a job in a music bar where i could sing to everyone.it`s not so much a jog as a learning chance . i can not only realize my dream bit also learn how to get along with customers and boss.that could be an important experience for me.

in short.i`m extremely excited for the coming.i can`t wait to become a singer in the music bar.`where there`s a will,there`s a way.\'as long as i work harder and harder, i would be a super star in the tv some day.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    題目:暑假將至,如何規劃暑假?

    Summer vacation is around the corner. Many students are longing for its coming. I’m no exception. Before become a freshman, I want to do something to enrich my experience. I plan to find a part-time job during the summer vacation. My dream is to be a singer, a super start, and bring joys to people. Therefore, I am looking for a job in a musical bar where I can sing to everyone. There is not many chances for a job like this. I realize not only singing but also learning how to get along with people, such customers and boss. It is going to be an important experience for me.

    In short, I’m extremely excited for the coming vacation. I cannot wait to be a singer in the musical bar. There is a saying: where there’s a will, there’s a way. I believe as long as work hard, my dream, be a super star on TV, will come true some day.

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  • 1 0 年前

    There is a saying

    應該改成As a (good) saying runs

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