笑笑 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

【急】英文作文,幫忙改正錯誤*

Newspapers play an important role in our life. We can hardly get along without newspapers. They has a lot of advantages. For instance, they can offer the functions of instruction and amusement. Newspapers inform us the latest news that we need not go out but know all around the world.

In the other hand, if newspaper are misued, they are become harmfu. Some paparazzi in order to get an exclusive interview, they make untrue reports, rumors to lead reader to fasle concept. There are many false advertising on newspapers that make many people to be fooled. To correct the mistakes and hold out the merit that can help newspapers become better and better.

已更新項目:

非常急件* 希望在星期日以前可以得到改正。

拜託,謝謝。

2 個已更新項目:

因為太難選了,所以,拍謝,我交付投票。

很謝謝你們幫我解答。 感恩*

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Newspapers play such an important role in our life that we can hardly get alone without them. Newspapers provide us a lot of advantages. For instance, they offer lots of instructional information and entertainment everyday. Moreover, through newspapers we get access to all the latest global news without going out.

    On the other hand, if misued, newspapers can be harmful. Some paparazzi, in order to get exclusive interviews, make untrue reports and rumors that mislead the readers. Besides, many of the ads in the newspaper are unreal and fool lots of people. To correct the mistakes and hold out the merit that can help newspapers become better and better. In conclusion, the more honest reports and ads there are, the better newspapers will be.

    不錯的文章, 絕大部份是照你的原意改, 只有最後一句收尾我覺得改成這樣會較有力

    "總而言之, 如果有越多的誠實報導跟廣告, 報紙就會變得越好"

    如果你要保持原來的總結那要把 that 刪掉才合文法

    To correct the mistakes and hold out the merit can help newspapers become better and better.

    To correct the mistakes and hold out the merit (主詞)

    can help (動詞)

    newspapers become better and better(受詞子句)

    2006-06-24 05:43:12 補充:

    拍謝∼∼第二段裡我建議改掉的那句話(To correct...better.)忘了刪掉, orz...請自行斟酌處理...

    參考資料: ME
  • 1 0 年前

    喔,對啊對啊。 還好耶,不會很想知道,反正是我們班的人就是了。

  • 1 0 年前

    HI~同學你是不是...林XX??如果是的話...嘿嘿...你的作文題目是不是叫Newspaper??因為星期一要...^^如果是的話...你就會想知道我是誰了~~ㄏㄏ

  • Antony
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    Newspapers play an important role in our life. We can hardly live without newspapers. They have a lot of advantages. For instance, they can offer the functions of instruction and amusement. Newspapers inform us about the latest global news that we need without going out

    .

    In the other hand, if newspapers are misued, they become harmful. Some paparazzi, in order to get an exclusive interview, make untrue reports or rumors to lead readers to trust. There are many false advertisings on newspapers that fool many people. To correct the mistakes and hold out the merit that can help newspapers become better and better.

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