? 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

再次修改…請大家看看要不要再修改…推甄自我介紹(中英文)…

在昨天發問以後,謝謝各位大大的修改及指正…

經過再次修改增加一些內容後,請大家再看一次…

告訴我那裡要改正的…謝謝

中文部分…

教授好,我的名字是xxx,住在台北縣,我畢業於國立淡水商工高級職業學校的會計事務科。這次很榮幸獲得教授的青睞,可以有這個機會來參與這次面試。

我的興趣是閱讀、上網、寫作和聽音樂,寫作不僅可以讓我運用文字的技巧也可以放鬆我平時累積的壓力,對我來說,這是一個一舉兩得的休閒活動。在閱讀方面,我最看的書藉是小說及史詩作品,這些作品讓我獲取許多課外的知識,尤其是歷史方面的知識。

我為何選擇國立雲林科技大學文化資產維護系的原因是:在瀏覽完貴校文化資產維護的網站,發現貴校的教學內容深深地吸引著我,有保存科技、歷史文化研究、文化資產經營,這幾項都是我希望以後能繼續鑽研的項目,假使我能進入文化資產維護系,我一定會盡我最大的努力來學習

英文部分…

Good day professor. My name is XXX, I live in Taipei. I graduate from National Tam-Shui vocational high school accountant business department. This time is honored very much obtains professor\'s favor, may have this opportunity to participate in this time interviewing.

My hobbies are reading, surfing the net, writing and listening to music. Leisure writing not only improve my writing skill but also help me relieve stress. Therefore to me, it is a pastime that kills two birds with one stone. In the reading aspect, the books which I most looked is the novel and the epic poem work, these works let me gain many extracurricular knowledge, in particular historical aspect knowledge.

I choose to apply for National Yunlin University of Science and Technology Department of Cultural Heritage Conservation, because the course design and arrangement appeal to me. I would like to go into the field of the research and management of cultural and historical resources for advanced study, and the program in Department of Cultural Heritage Conservation would be the best choice for me.

謝謝大大們了哦!

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    1. I "graduate" from National Tam-Shui → 妳已畢業,所以用過去式"graduated"

    2. This time is honored ~~ → It is an honor for me to gain my professors' supports (應該不止一個教授,所以用複數!) to have this interview opportunity.

    3. Leisure writing not only "improve" → improves

    4. but also "help" me ~~→ helps

    5. "relieve" stress → alleviate stress

    6.Therefore to me ~~ → Therefore", for" me, ~~

    7. In the reading aspect → From the reading aspect ~~

    8. the books which I ~~~ → the readings which I like the most are novels and the epic poem works.

    9. these works ~~~前面最好有句點,也就是說這一句重開一句!不要和上一段有關係,要分句的意思!

    10. many extracurricular knowledge → much knowledge which I cannot learn from textbooks.

    11. historical aspect knowledge → historical knowledge 就好了,不用 aspect

    12. I choose to apply for ~~~ → I apply for 就好了,不用寫 "choose to",不然會很中文!

    13. the course design and arrangement appeal to me → the course "designs" and "arrangements" appeal to me.

    14. go into "the" field → this

    先降啦!祝好運!

    參考資料: 我的小腦袋瓜
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