Good day professor. My name is XXX, I live in Taipei. I graduate from National Tam-Shui vocational high school accountant business department. This time is honored very much obtains professor\'s favor, may have this opportunity to participate in this time interviewing.
My hobbies are reading, surfing the net, writing and listening to music. Leisure writing not only improve my writing skill but also help me relieve stress. Therefore to me, it is a pastime that kills two birds with one stone. In the reading aspect, the books which I most looked is the novel and the epic poem work, these works let me gain many extracurricular knowledge, in particular historical aspect knowledge.
I choose to apply for National Yunlin University of Science and Technology Department of Cultural Heritage Conservation, because the course design and arrangement appeal to me. I would like to go into the field of the research and management of cultural and historical resources for advanced study, and the program in Department of Cultural Heritage Conservation would be the best choice for me.
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1. I "graduate" from National Tam-Shui → 妳已畢業，所以用過去式"graduated"
2. This time is honored ~~ → It is an honor for me to gain my professors' supports (應該不止一個教授，所以用複數！) to have this interview opportunity.
3. Leisure writing not only "improve" → improves
4. but also "help" me ~~→ helps
5. "relieve" stress → alleviate stress
6.Therefore to me ~~ → Therefore", for" me, ~~
7. In the reading aspect → From the reading aspect ~~
8. the books which I ~~~ → the readings which I like the most are novels and the epic poem works.
9. these works ~~~前面最好有句點，也就是說這一句重開一句！不要和上一段有關係，要分句的意思！
10. many extracurricular knowledge → much knowledge which I cannot learn from textbooks.
11. historical aspect knowledge → historical knowledge 就好了，不用 aspect
12. I choose to apply for ~~~ → I apply for 就好了，不用寫 "choose to"，不然會很中文！
13. the course design and arrangement appeal to me → the course "designs" and "arrangements" appeal to me.
14. go into "the" field → this