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金髮尤物英文請幫我訂正

金法尤物 Legally Blonde

艾爾伍茲是個漂亮又時髦的金髮女郎

elle woods is a beautiful and fashion Blonde

畢業後想要嫁給的男友

she wants to get marry with his boyfriend after they graduate

但是她男友要進哈佛並且要跟她分手

but her bf was going to 哈佛 and break up with her

他要聰明的女友而不是只會打扮的女友

he want a smart gf ,not a gf who will only make up.

艾爾也決定近哈佛

Elle decided to get into 哈佛

讓大家知道他不只漂亮也很聰明

she wants everyone know she’s not only pretty but also clever

最後艾爾變成成功的律師,並且找到了珍愛

in the end , elle become a successful lawyer and also find her true love.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Elle Woods is a beautiful and fashionable blonde girl. She wants to get married with her boyfriend after they graduate from college. However, her boyfriend plans to study at Harvard Law. So, he wants to break up with her because he wants a smart girlfriend who knows more than just looking pretty and make ups. Therefore, Elle decides to get into Harvard as well. She wants to prove to everyone that she is not only pretty but smart too. In the end, Elle becomes a successful lawyer and also found her true love.

    參考資料: Me (I teach English in Taiwan)
  • 1 0 年前

    沒什麼大問題, 只是時態變來變去.....

    2.哈佛:Harvard University

    3.艾爾伍茲 英文忘了大寫

    4. he want a smart gf ,not a gf who will only make up. 後面可以修改一下.

    5. elle become a successful lawyer and also find her true love. 第三人稱動詞記得要變化

    都小地方, 大致上通順明瞭.

    參考看看吧

    參考資料: cool joe
  • 1 0 年前

    幫Danny更正依個小錯誤 第三句應該是breaks....

  • Danny
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前

    大致ok,只有一些小錯誤 :

    1.第三人稱單數後面動詞沒加 s

    2.大小寫等問題

    3.時式反覆不一致

    4.哈佛=Harvard ......

    金法尤物 Legally Blonde

    艾爾伍茲是個漂亮又時髦的金髮女郎

    Elle woods is a beautiful and fashionable Blonde

    畢業後想要嫁給的男友

    she wants to marry her boyfriend after they graduate

    但是她男友要進哈佛並且要跟她分手

    but her boyfriend is going to Harvard and break up with her

    他要聰明的女友而不是只會打扮的女友

    he wants a smart girlfriend ,not a girlfriend who only pays attention on make-up.

    艾爾也決定近哈佛

    Elle also decides to get into Harvard

    讓大家知道他不只漂亮也很聰明

    she wants everyone to know she's not only pretty but also clever

    最後艾爾變成成功的律師,並且找到了珍愛

    In the end , Elle becomes a successful lawyer and also finds her true love.

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