劈哩郵俠 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請問關於英文作文改正的問題~拜託了! 急!! 10點~

以下是不才我的英文作文裡面部分內容,

覺得比較可能有錯誤的地方~

懇請高手指教一下~

快考試了~

拜託拜託!

(題目是:對我來說最重要的事物)

1.價值觀:view of value

2.I admire each notes which construct beautiful melody in a song, and all the songs that I love is the most beautiful scene in the world.

(我想表達這樣的意思:我仔細欣賞一首曲子中每個音符構成的旋律的美好,而每一首我喜愛的曲子,都是世界上最美的畫(風景).)

3.I can obtain the silent feeling from listening music, which is very valuable to the people today.

(我能從音樂當中獲取對現代人而言是相當珍貴的寧靜感.)

4.When I listen to a song,I can recall the memory that I listened first time then.

(當我聽一首曲子時, 我能夠回憶起第一次聽那首歌的時候的感覺.)

5.感性的 sensitive

懂得欣賞 ???

以上問題~拜託了!

先獻上由衷的感謝!!

3 個解答

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    原: 1.價值觀:view of value

    自: value (value即可代表價值觀了)

    原: 2.I admire each notes which construct beautiful melody in a song, and all the songs that I love is the most beautiful scene in the world.

    自: I enjoy glorious melody of every songs composed by each musical note , and all my lovely songs are the most beautiful scene in the world.

    (我想表達這樣的意思:我仔細欣賞一首曲子中每個音符構成的旋律的美好,而每一首我喜愛的曲子,都是世界上最美的畫(風景).)

    原:3.I can obtain the silent feeling from listening music, which is very valuable to the people today.

    自: I can feel silence from music which is precious to people.

    (我能從音樂當中獲取對現代人而言是相當珍貴的寧靜感.)

    原:4.When I listen to a song,I can recall the memory that I listened first time then.

    自: When I listen to a song, I still can memory that feeling like my first time listend.

    (當我聽一首曲子時, 我能夠回憶起第一次聽那首歌的時候的感覺.)

    這一句中文怪怪的,我把它解釋成,你聽某首曲子,仍可以回憶起當初聽到那首歌的感覺。

    原:5.感性的 sensitive

    懂得欣賞 ???

    自:不好意思,這一題不知道在問什麼

    若是懂的欣賞的話的英文可以是 understand how to enjoy

    感性的英文: sensitive 可以

    參考資料: me
  • 杰暘
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    這句When I listen to a song, I still can memory that feeling like my first time listend. 恐怕須再琢磨一下.memory是名詞(被誤當動詞用),或許可改成...,I can still remember that feeling I had as I listened before.

  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    我不會英語,所以打國字! 請多保函!!!

    2.我仔細欣賞每首曲子中的韻律,而這每首曲子都是我最喜愛的,也是上最美的人生.

    3.我從音樂中獲取現代人無法得到的安祥與寧靜.

    4.每當我聽到一首曲子時,我都回想起第一次聽到那首歌的感覺.

    第一提和 最後一個我看不太懂!!!!! 抱歉!!

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