㊣秘密客㊣ 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

以下是我的英文自傳,請幫我改一下,多謝

My name is Jeff Lin.There are four people in my family,my father and two younger sisters.They all are office workers.I have the optimistic character and keep initiative since childhood.When I was a student,I used frequently work to make money.

I go study the electronic engineering department at Chang Cung University and have learned lots of basic knowledge about electronic industry.I am good at electronics,linear and nonlinear circuits and advanced engineering mathematics.During the time I study in univerty,I am an important cadre of my department and I deal with the design of activity flow,locations and equipments.Based on these experiences,I understand the importance of teamwork and I also have learned how to get along with my colleagues.

My favorite hobbies are playing bastketball,working out in gym,watching TV programs about athletic games.I also enjoy playing computer games,accessing the Internet,listening to music and watching movies.

In the future,I hope I can strengthen my practical experience and professional knowledge form work.I will know which skill I lack form work and I will make them up by keeping learning.I believe that I can contribute a lot if I have the opportunity.

我第一段要說的是.....{我叫Lin Jeff,我家裡有四個人,我父親與二個妹妹.他們都是上班族,我從小就有樂觀積極的個性與進取的精神.當我還是學生時,我經常利用打工來賺錢.}我本來想寫我父親是水電工,我妹妹是寵物店的店長,另外一個在貿易公司上班,可是不知道怎麼翻.....哈

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    1 0 年前
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    I, Jeff Lin, come from a four-membered family in which my father and two younger sisters were included as well.

    All of them were engaged in office buziness. As for me, I was endowed with an optimistic character and always get myself initiative.

    When I was at school, I was able to forage for money I needed.

    I got a paid job at the electronic engineering department of Chang Cung University, by which I also got a lot of something essential to electronic industry.

    II was well versed in electronics, linear and nonlinear circuits and advanced engineering math as well.

    When I was there, I've got involved in an important cadre of the department to which I belonged. I dealt with the design of activity flow,locations and equipments.

    What shone through on such background that I held was the perfectly social ability I've got to run such a teamwork and to get along well with those who'll work with me.

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    As for those I favored, among them are playing bastketball,working out in gym,watching athletic games on TV. Besides, I also enjoy playing computer games, getting on the Internet, listening to music and going out for movies.

    Afterwards, there will be prospects to make me stronger in practical experience and perspectives to facilitate my profession as well. With regard to everything I mentioned, you know, I'll go to great lengths to get the goal that will profit the very company, I promised. Why not, Give it a try?

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  • 1 0 年前

    改得很棒!修改者的英文功力不錯哦!

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