請英文高手幫幫忙,謝謝(幫我修改信)

我想寫信給AC米蘭球員

請幫我看看這封信,有哪些錯誤?謝謝

Dear Sandro,

Come sta? I am your Taiwan fan. You have a great skill of defense. I enjoy watching that you shuttle backwards and forwards in the field,but still remains elegant. I have a request. Would you mind giving me your signed photo? Thank you in advance.Finally, wish you luck, good health and all the best this year.

Yours sincerely,

Celina

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    Dear Sandro,

    Come sta? I am a fan of yours from Taiwan. You have great defending skills. I enjoy watching you shuttle backwards and forwards in the field, whilst still remain elegant. I have a request. Would you mind giving me a signed photo of you? Thank you in advance. Finally, I wish you luck, good health and all the best this year.

    Yours sincerely,

    Celina

    *你寫的很不錯啊~! 幫你改了幾個字, 比較流順一點. 希望你可以盡快接到回信! ^^

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