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請看看這段英文有哪裡要修改的

Here is my crazy family

my grandfather is called ernest. he\'s thin and old.

my grandmother martha(這個意思是人名還是家庭主婦?) is beautiful and clever.

my uncle Andy is a very funny .

my aunt Amy . his wife is very pretty.

They\'ve got three children. I like my cousin very much.

My father is a happy man. He comes from Taiwan.

He\'s very different from my mother. she\'s nosiy.

這有哪裡要修改的 能幫我修改一下嗎?

請讓文章順暢一點 或加些形容詞 謝謝

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    1. 句子完後面要加句號.

    2. 人名第一個字母要大寫.

    3. Martha 是人名.

    4. 形容詞前面不加 a, 要不然就要多加個名詞在後面. (very funny/a very funny man)

    5. 應該是用逗號, 不是句號.

    6. 3個小孩應該 cousin 要加 s. 如果只喜歡一個, 應該把名字寫出來.

    7. 沒錯.

    8. 應該用逗號, 因為形容媽媽很吵. 應該是 noisy.

    正確為:

    Here is my crazy family. My grandfather is called Ernest, he's thin and old. My grandmother Martha is beautiful and clever. My uncle Andy is very funny, and my aunt Amy is very pretty. They've got three children. I like my cousins very much. My father is a happy man, and he comes from Taiwan. He's very different from my mother, she's noisy.

    參考資料: Self
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