Elaine 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫我訂正我的英文文法~謝謝

I am never seriously thinking about my future plan.

If it is possible I want to be a computer engineer.

I like to research into computer program like HTML (Hypertext Markup Language) and CSS (Cascading Style Sheet).

It is one of my favorite hobbies, too.

Computer engineer can earning a lot of money.

Not only that, I also can learning much knowledge in my profession ambit.

Although I haven’t learn correlative knowledge about computer, but I want try it.

I will do it one day, because I believe my mind.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    1. I am never seriously thinking about my future plan.

    --- > I never think about my future plan seriously.

    2. Computer engineer can earning a lot of money. + It is one of my favorite hobbies, too. (可合併寫!)

    --> To be a computer engineer, which is also one of my favorite hobbies, could bring me lots of fortune.

    ---> I could earn lots of fortune by being a computer engineer, which is also one of my favorite hobbies. (若要求職,不建議你醬寫!)

    3. Not only that, I also can learning much knowledge in my profession ambit.

    ---> Besides (Additionally), I also can learn much more knowledge in my professional ambit.

    4. Although I haven’t learn correlative knowledge about computer, but I want try it.

    ---> Even though I don't have lots of knowledge relating to computer, I would like to try.

    5. I will do it one day, because I believe my mind.

    ---> I believe that I will make it come true one day!

    參考資料: me, 提供一些我自己的寫法..Hope it's helpful to you..
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  • 1 0 年前

    I never seriously think about my future plan.

    If it is possible, I want to be a computer engineer.

    I like to study computer program such as HTML ( Hypertext Markup Language ) and CSS ( Cascading Style Sheet).

    It is one of my favorite hobbies as well.

    Computer engineer not only could make a lot of money but also I could learn much knowledge in my prefessional ambit.

    Although I haven't learned correlative knowledge about computer, I want to try it.

    I will do it in one day because I believe in my mind.

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