Elaine 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

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My favorite star is Tomohisa Yamashi ta.Yamashi ta pi is a Japanese idol. He is also one of Japanese group “NEWS” members.

I like him because I saw him act in a teleplay accidentally. I discovered him act out the role very well

Yamashi ta pi has released many album and EP. I don’t buy any items because I am not a adoringly blind person.

He has a motto. His motto is “to keep up and don’t give up”. Because this sentence, he has many fans today.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    我覺得啦 ~ 把 "意外地" accidentically 改成 by chance 會比較好.

    「I discovered him act out the role very well.」

    →「I found that his acting of that role was amazing !」

    「Yamashi ta pi has released many album and EP.」

    →「Yamashi ta pi has released many albums and singles.」

    「I don't buy any items because I am not a adoringly blind person.」

    →「I don't buy any item of them because I don't adore someone blindingly.」

    「He has a motto. His motto is “to keep up and don't give up”. 」

    →「He has a motto, that is, "To keep up and don't give up."」

    「Because this sentence, he has many fans today. 」

    →「Due to this sentence, he has many fans today.」

    參考資料: myself
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