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威士忌對白翻譯,急件!請各位英文翻譯達人幫幫忙!(20點)

有幾個對白希望各位翻譯達人幫忙,有些是中文的寫法,英文或許沒有這些字,這種情況請以 \"意思正確\"、\"文句順暢\"、\"文法正確\"為主。

1.「有貫注了生命的威士忌嗎?」

2.「還是我太苛求了?」

3.「以苛求釀造的威士忌」------\"苛求\"英文的正確說法是什麼?

(以上三句,中文可以將動詞講成名詞,英文或許不行,請以最接近的意思翻譯)

4.「多一點也不對,少一點也不好」

5.「在執著中,蘊藏一股熱情」(蘊藏可用\"有\",執著有精準的字嗎?)

6.「用\"信念\"成就的威士忌」

(信念目前以Belief為主,\"成就\"這個動詞,可用釀造或是製造取代,或是有更貼近意思的用法?)

7.「什麼是最好的威士忌?」

8.「要有堅持的精神」

9.「世界Bartender一致的推薦」

10.「蘊藏了一生執著的威士忌」

(這句最難,有勞各位達人了!意思接近最重要)

若是無法完全照著字意,起碼精神上意思要對,最重要的是文法千萬不能錯~~

多謝各位達人的幫忙,小弟感激不盡!

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另外,有些沒有主詞的,請以威士忌為主詞,謝謝!

2 個解答

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    1. Is there whiskey from vitality ?

    2. Am I too picky (finicky) ?

    3. "The whiskey" is brewed through the racket. or "The whiskey" is brewed without compromise. 第一句照字意翻,第二句照語意翻。若為廣告詞可將 be 動詞省略。很多廣告都是這樣的,你是廣告人應該知道。

    4. Making it more would not do, and neither would making it less.

    5. Insisting (persisting) awakens(arouses) the vitality. / or There is vitality out of insistence. 皆照語意翻。

    6. "The Whiskey" is made from Belief!

    7. What is the exclusive / ultimate / first-class / top whiskey?

    8. There must be insistence involved / included. insistence 本身即有一種精神的涵意了,所以不需要再加上 spirit of insistence。

    9. World-famous Bartenders recommend in chorus.

    10."The Wiskey" is enriched by inflexible determination.

    2006-09-01 11:37:21 補充:

    最後一句"The Whiskey" is enriched by permanent inflexible determination. or "The Whiskey" is enriched by inflexible determination throughout life.

    參考資料: 我,還有牛津大字典
  • HA
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前

    1."Attentive the whisky of the life?"

    2."Or did I demand too much too?"

    3."With the whisky that demands too much to make by fermentation"------What is the right parlance that"demand too much" English ?

    4."More also wrong, a little bit and few is not good either"

    5."In the middle of persisting contain a spell of enthusiasm"(contain and can use to"have", persist to have a precise word?)

    6."Use the whisky of[with]"conviction" achievement"

    7."What is the best whisky?"

    8."Have to have the spirit of[with] persistence"

    9."The world Bartender consistent recommendation"

    10."Contained whole life to persist of whisky"

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