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請幫我糾正有無錯誤的文法!!!

請幫我糾正有無錯誤的文法(順帶講解一下錯誤的地方..麻煩了!謝謝)!!!

My name is Iris.

My English is not well ,but I want to join your club.

I hope I can speak and write English better.

Start is hard.

How do I have no fear of learn English?

May I ask a question?

How many people usual in your coffee shop of learn English"?

(If I write wrong...tell me,please!)

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    My name is Iris. →correct

    My English is not well ,but I want to join your club.

    此句應該要將well 改成good. 只是比較級的用法,不用用到最高級

    → My English is not good, but I would like to join your club. (用would like比較禮貌)

    I hope I can speak and write English better.

    → I hope I can speak and write English well.(參考)

    Start is hard. (不懂此句的意思耶~~是指起頭難嗎?)

    →It is hard to start or Starting is hard. (動詞不能直接擺在句首ㄛ~可將其改成動名詞的用法)

    How do I have no fear of learn English?

    此句是不是要表達 "我該如何沒有學英文的恐懼呢?"

    →How can I learn English without fear? 供您參考~

    若要用您的原句,您應該在介系詞後面加動名詞或名詞,不可直接使用動詞喔~

    → How do I have no fear of learning English? (此句的說法較為直接翻譯ㄛ~)

    May I ask a question?

    →May I have a question? 用have會使句型較漂亮~ 用ask也可以滴

    How many people usual in your coffee shop of learn English"?

    → 此句少掉動詞ㄛ~

    How many people usual learn English in your coffee shop?

    頻率動詞要放在動詞之前,Be動詞之後滴~

    以上僅供您參考ㄛ~~

    祝您英文進步ㄛ~~

    參考資料: 自己
  • 1 0 年前

    My name is Iris.

    My English is not good enough, but I still want to join your club.

    I hope to speak and write English better.

    The begining is difficult(hard 也可以)

    How can I learn English without fear?

    My I ask a question?

    How many people in your coffee shop usually to learn English?

    (不知道"""是什麼意思,所以沒改)

    參考資料: me
  • 1 0 年前

    My name is Iris.

    My English is not good ,but I still want to join your club.

    I hope I can improve my English speaking and writing.

    Starting is hard.

    How can I have no fear in learning English?

    May I ask a question?

    How many people are there usually in your coffee shop learning English& quoting;?

    (If I made grammar mistakes, please inform me!)

    這樣改會比較好!

    參考資料: me
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