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Elise 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

麻煩英文達人幫我修正文法及句型結構

這不是功課喔, 這是一份正式的proposal需要大家幫幫忙XXX will perform a new production Four Seasons in Taiwan in 2007. It always has to find the channels to inform and attract the audiences to attend its performances. YY is a public relations expertise in art field in Taiwan; YY will assist XXX to interest the audiences in order to meet this campaign goals and objectives.  Before starting practice the campaign, two primary researches conducted by YY are necessary in order to define the current situation for XXX. A brief problem statement is as follow: In order to gather enough information about XXX, YY carried out an interview to manager of XXX in June (see Appendix D). It was found out that XXX targeted on the audiences broadly and it has limited resources to use to deliver information to the audiences result in audiences has very minimal awareness and image of XXX. Therefore, building up corporate image, awareness to the audiences are essential for XXX. Accordingly, YY has identified the following goals, objectives, strategies and tactics to communicate with the audiences in order to increase their interests on attending XXX's performance. 

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沒有中文ㄟ,一開始就是英文了, 我也覺得是中式思考模式的英文, 所以才要麻煩英文達人幫幫忙囉

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xxx將在2007年呈現新作品"四季", xxx需要吸引觀眾群前來欣賞他的演出

YY是台灣藝術公關的首選, YY將會協助xxx達到他的目標

在執行規劃前, 為了正確的分析XXX的情況,蒐集足夠的資訊是必要的,所以YY做了兩個研究

為了更了解xxx,YY首先訪問了XXX的manager,YY發現xxx將觀眾群設定太廣,及xxx沒有足夠的資源傳遞資訊給觀眾,所以觀眾對於他們的企業形象非常模糊不清

所以YY認為提升xxx的知名度及增強其企業形象,將有助於xxx吸引觀眾群,所以目標及企劃將列舉如下

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  • 1 0 年前
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    XXX will present his new work –Four Seasons in Taiwan in 2007. It always needs to find the channels to inform and attract the audiences to attend its performances.

    YY has expertise in public relations in the Taiwanese art field and (he/she 依 YY的性別決定) will assist XXX to attract audiences to meet the campaign goals and objectives.

    Before running the campaign, YY conducted two primary researches to define the current situation for XXX. A brief analysis is stated here.

    In order to gather enough information about XXX, YY interviewed the manager of XXX in June (see Appendix D). (He/she, 依 YY的性別決定) found that the range of XXX’s audiences are too broad and XXX has limited resources to deliver the information to the audiences. These result in the minimal audience awareness of the image of XXX.

    YY believes that building up the corporation image and the awareness of the audiences are essential to attract audiences for XXX. Accordingly, (he/she) has identified the goals, objectives, strategies and tactics (see below) to communicate with the audiences in order to increase their interests in attending XXX 's performance.

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    要不要把中文也貼上來. 看到你寫的都是用中文的思考方式表達的. 老外會看的霧煞煞地.

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