請修正我的肉腳英文

The royal badge-The daughter of the Nile River.

This story would be the Egyptian's Iliad. Inspirer by one of famous Japanese comic books, the royal badge. A comic book series over thirty years and the readers full of whole Asia area.

It begins at a twenty-first century American girl, her name is Craol, who fall in love with the ancient Egypt culture, then get into Egypt University to study archeology. She comes from a very rich family, because her father is a successful businessman. He also in Egypt to direct a tomb excavation in famous "The Great and Majestic Necropolis of the Millions of Years of the Pharaoh", at Luxor .

One day they discover a brand new Pharaoh’s tomb there, but they have no idea where already to infuriate the ancient curse on the tomb. So a Mummy brings Craol back to the ancient Egypt for the punishment.

For ancient Egyptian people, the future knowledge of Craol is a miracle. They dignify her with the name of the daughter of the Nile River , and she fall in love with the young pharaoh, Memphis .

But the enemy of Egypt , Hittie, is planning to conquer Egypt , so Izmir , the prince of Hittie. He plunders Craol back to Hittie, and to raise a spectacular war between two ancient cultures.

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小弟英文不精,請各位英文達人大德,幫我修改一下哪邊錯誤。

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This story would be the Egyptian's Iliad.

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不知為何一直出現亂碼?這是埃及人版的伊利亞德(木馬屠城記).

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謝謝,寫的很棒,可是我有個疑問。

"The story of The Royal Badge was originally adapted from the Egyptian Iliad."

這句會不會讓沒看過"尼羅河的女兒"的人,特別是外國人,錯認為"改編自埃及的伊利亞德",

(伊利亞德是希臘荷馬史詩,埃及沒有這玩意兒。)

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    The story of The Royal Badge was originally adapted from the Egyptian Iliad. It was later made into a series of Japanese comic books thirty years ago. The Royal Badge is very popular among the Asian readers.

    The Royal Badge is a story about a girl's trip back to the ancient Egypt.

    Craol, an American girl from wealthy family had a great passion about the ancient Egyptian culture. She attended the Egypt University to study archeology while her father was responsible for the famous excavation of tomb at Luxor. Luxor is where the great and majestic necropolis of the Pharaoh is located. One day, Croal and her father discovered a new tomb that had never been discovered before. Their curiousness had infuriated the Pharaoh and a curse was put on them. Craol was taken back to the ancient Egypt by a Mummy for punishment.

    Craol’s advanced knowledge was a miracle to the ancient Egyptians. Croal was praised with the name of the daughter of the Nile River.Gradually, she fell in love with the young pharaoh, Memphis. Unfortunately, Craol was captured by the army of Hittie – the enemy of Egypt. Izmir, the prince of Hittie had always been planning to evade Egypt and after Croal was captured Izmir raised a spectacular war between two ancient cultures.

    雖然改了很多

    但希望你還可以接受

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