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Little Women

In an American big town suburb, having four sisters. Because their father leaves the family to join the army, and hasn’t come back for a long time, so they only can live with the gentle mother. The equestrian has four beautiful good girls, four sisters’ individualities entirely different;

Big daughter Meg somewhat vain but is very gentle, but in parents' influence and under life disciplining, causes her to be glad accepts the poor actually happy love.

Boyish Jo is humorous frank and persistent, rigid dream, final achievement content enterprise and marriage

Gentle Beth; love to play piano, one time she rescue the poor person, unfortunately catches an illness dies.

Youngest Amy makes the trouble for the sisters, she loves art very much, and she married with his good friend.

The story mainly describes the intravenous drip which this family

member lives, in the ordinary life, as a result of the disposition

difference, between each other unavoidably has the friction because of

some trivial minor matters, quarrels unavoidably, but in addition,

also can have some to make the amusing thing which one knows whether to laugh or cry, or unexpected wonderful matter. In rubs, in from time to time the harmony passes through from time to time their youth year.

Under mother's leadership, although is poor, the day passes

difficultly, but actually can help the poor person which compares them

to need to help. Four sisters experienced together a succession of parted forever with life being tempered by hardships, and in under the mother compassion guidance, respectively displayed manager, became "Little Women" maturely.

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  • kevin
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    1 0 年前
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    Little Women

    There were four sisters living in an American big town suburb . Their father left them to join the army, and had not come back for a long time, so they could only live with their gentle mother. The equestrian has four good beautiful girls, whose personality was much different.

    The eldest daughter, Meg, was somewhat vain but very gentle, under her parents' influence and life disciplining, let her be glad to accept the poor actually happy love.

    Boyish Jo was humorous frank,,persistent, with rigid dream, finally achieved content enterprise and got marriage

    Gentle Beth, loved playing piano, she rescued a poor person one time, unfortunately got illness and died.

    The youngest sister, Amy, a troublemaker, loved art very much, and married with her good friend.

    The story mainly describes the intravenous drip where this family

    member lived, during their ordinary life, as a result of the disposition

    difference between them, unavoidab frictions were caused by

    some trivial minor matters, in addition, they also have some amusing things that one knows whether to laugh or cry, or unexpected wonderful matter. In rubs, from time to time the harmony passes through from time to time in their youth year.

    最後一段看不太懂你想表達的

    暫時先照我猜測的修正

    Under mother's leadership, although is poor, the day passes

    difficultly, but actually can help the poor person which compares them

    to need to help. Four sisters experienced together a succession of parted forever with life being tempered by hardships, and in under the mother compassion guidance, respectively displayed manager, became "Little Women" maturely.

    參考資料: 英文家教
  • 1 0 年前

    Little Women

    In an American big town suburb, there has four sisters.

    Because their father left the family to join the army and had not come back for a long time, the four sisters could only live with their gentle mother.

    The equestrian has the four beautiful good girls, four totally different characteristics;

    Meg, the oldest one, is somewhat vain but very gentle.

    The influence from her parents and the good discipline learned from life have developed her optimistic personality to accept the poor but happy love.

    自己寫的故事嗎?

    看起來很像是用軟體中翻英的...

    礙於時間關係,只先修改一小部分,其餘有時間再補.... 如還有需要的話~

    參考資料: 大腦
  • 1 0 年前

    Little Women

    In an American big town suburb,having four sisters.Because their father leaves the family to join the army,and hasn ’ t come back for a long time,so they only can live with the gentle mother.The equestrian has four beautiful good girls,four sisters ’individualities entirely different;

    Big daughter Meg somewhat vain but is very gentle, but in parents' influence and under life disciplining, causes her to be glad accepts the poor actually happy love.

    Boyish Jo is humorous frank and persistent, rigid dream, final achievement content enterprise and marriage

    Gentle Beth; love to play piano, one time she rescue the poor person, unfortunately catches an illness dies.

    Youngest Amy makes the trouble for the sisters, she loves art very much, and she married with his good friend.

    The story mainly describes the intravenous drip which this family

    member lives, in the ordinary life, as a result of the disposition

    difference, between each other unavoidably has the friction because of

    some trivial minor matters, quarrels unavoidably, but in addition,

    also can have some to make the amusing thing which one knows whether to laugh or cry, or unexpected wonderful matter. In rubs, in from time to time the harmony passes through from time to time their youth year.

    Under mother's leadership, although is poor, the day passes

    difficultly, but actually can help the poor person which compares them

    to need to help. Four sisters experienced together a succession of parted forever with life being tempered by hardships, and in under the mother compassion guidance, respectively displayed manager, became "Little Women" maturely.

    參考資料: 自己檢查
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