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請幫我看一下,文法對不對

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Good morning, ledies and gentlemen, Today. I’m going to be showing our product Hand cram. I’m going to start with use the hand cram benefits. First, I’m going to tell you about it can protect your both hands. Second, it can let your both had avoiding external harm. Third, I’d like to demonstrate our product component is natural plant. Finally, I’ll going to our product trial product to you.

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    Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today, I'd like to show you our product, hand cream. I'm going to start with the use of hand cream benefits. Firstly, I would like to tell you that it can protect both of your hands. Secondly, it can let both hands avoid from external harm. Thirdly, I'd like to demonstrate that our product's ingredient is from natural plant. Finally, I would like to present our product to you.

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