請幫我看看一下,這篇文章有錯的地方嗎?(英文的)

One day, I go on an expedition in Taiwan Challenge France the football . Team leader of France - Xi Dan, he is very troubling, because he is very serious in football No matter the playing skill is or the experience. I do not take him often, I can only use the small means , I ridicule him , satirize him He can not stand finally, using the head mallet that he is most good at to me, that aches very much He is asked to appear on the scene finally. We won this match finally Very happy, we have won. -------------------------"有一天,我代表台灣出征向法國挑戰足球。法國隊的隊長 ─ 席丹,他很令人頭痛,因為他在足球方面很厲害無論是球技或者是經驗。我拿他沒輒,我只能用小手段,我譏笑他、諷刺他他最後受不了了,對我使用他最擅長的頭槌,那很痛他最後被請出場了。我們最後贏了這場比賽很開心,我們贏了"----------------幫我看看囉THANKS

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  • 1 0 年前
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    One day, I go on an expedition in for Taiwan Challenge France the football . Team leader of France - Xi Dan Zidane, he is very troubling, because he is very serious in football No matter the playing skill is or the experience. I do not take him often, I can only use the small means cheap shots, I ridicule him , satirize him He can not cannot stand finally, using the head mallet that he is most good at to me, that aches very much He is asked to appear on the scene rejected finally. We won this match finally Very happy, we have won.這樣改的話,應該會被網友臭罵,重新調整一下吧。One day, I represented Taiwan to challenge France football.  The capitan of France Zidane was very good in both skill and experience.  He was a big problem, and we cannot beat him.  I could only insult and giggle him, used these kind of cheap shots.  He could not take it anymore finally, and he head butt ME instead of the BALL.  Damn! That was hurt!  For the head butt, he got rejected.  We won the game because he was gone.  We were so happy.解說一下:cheap shot = 賤招head butt = 頭槌Zidane = 席丹expedition = 遠征(用在探險比較多)因為這是已經發生的事,故要用過去式。您之前的翻法是直接中翻英,但要用英文的說法才會比較順,故把您的文章整個改掉,請見諒。

    參考資料: 曾住美國10幾年,現住日本(努力學日文)。
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