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A famous person I like is Dan Brown. He is a writer and he is an American. He wrote several novels. His novels have been translated in more than 40 languages. I think it’s very difficult to connect with truth and figment. He has to do researched to support his opinion. And a good writer should know how to tell everyone in straight and don’t be misunderstand. “Angels & Demons” is the most favorite book of me. He tries to prove God create the earth and humankind and everything is reasonable in this book even some things is fiction. Lucky for him that his wife had back him up to do everything. That’s the biggest support to he could absorption to accomplish his goal. No matter how, the most important must be persevered in his ego ideal. He did the good job and that’s why I really admire his talent for writing.

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    1 0 年前
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    A famous person I like is Dan Brown.

    -- The famous person I like is Dan Brown.

    He is a writer and he is an American.

    -- He is an American and a writer.

    He wrote several novels. His novels have been translated in more than 40 languages.

    -- He wrote several novels, which had been translated to more than 40 languages.

    I think it’s very difficult to connect with truth and figment.

    -- I think it's very difficult to connect reality to fiction.

    He has to do researched to support his opinion.

    -- He has to do some research to support his opinions.

    And a good writer should know how to tell everyone in straight and don’t be misunderstand.

    -- A good writer should be able to express his opinions to his readers without misleading them.

    “Angels & Demons” is the most favorite book of me.

    -- “Angels & Demons” is my most favorite.

    He tries to prove God create the earth and humankind and everything is reasonable in this book even some things is fiction.

    -- He tried to prove that God create the Earth and human, and everything in his book is reasonable, even if it's fiction.

    Lucky for him that his wife had back him up to do everything. That’s the biggest support to he could absorption to accomplish his goal.

    -- Luckily, he has his wife's fully support, which is the biggest support that he could have to accomplish his goal.

    No matter how, the most important must be persevered in his ego ideal.

    -- No matter how, the most important thing must be persevered in his ego ideal.

    -- (ps: I'm not sure what you mean ego ideal.)

    He did the good job and that’s why I really admire his talent for writing.

    -- He is talented, and that's why I really admire of his skill of writing.

  • 1 0 年前

    The famous person I like is Dan Brown. He is an American writer. He wrote several novels which have been translated into more than 40 languages. I think it's very difficult to connect the truth with the figment. He must do a lot of research to support his opinion. Also, a good writer should know how to articulate very well. My favorite novel of his is "Angel and Demons." He tries to prove that not only God created the earth and human beings but also everything in his book is reasonable even though some parts are fictitious. Fortunately, his wife tried her best to assist him and it's the biggest support to make him concentrate on accomplishing the goal. No matter what, his persistent ego ideal is the most important element to make him succeed. He did the good job and that's why I really admire his talent for writing.

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