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I was born in a well-fixed family, my parents gave us to accept good education depend on the brave spirit and thrifty attitude. My parents were retired and they are both the long-term volunteers. Since I was a child, they teach us the reason of one's way of getting along with people and must have a heart of gratitude depend on the examples of dailiness. I have an older who occupies a sales and a younger sister who is a college student. Although we are in the different field, we also strive in order to our dream. Since I studied in the junior high school, I began to fat, but I still face with many people and things confidently. Because I brave in attempt to new things and love to help people, so I always have good interpersonal relationship and nice life. I like the activities about volleyball, badminton, calligraphy and piano. They can train my team spirit, physical force and patient and confidence.

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  • Elise
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    1 0 年前
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    I was born in a well-fixed family, my parents my parents gave us to accept good education depend on the brave spirit and thrifty attitude(這句你想表達什麼呢)Both My parents are retired and they have been long-term volunteers for many years(這句我建議你寫的更清楚一點,你是想要表達父母退休後的生活,還是說他們一直以來是長期志工,最重要的是這句話跟整個自傳的關聯性在哪裡,建議你可以做個連結).Since(這個字的用法通常要與現在有關聯,也就是說需要用完成式的機率很大) I was a child, they have been teaching us(這邊你還未提及你的姊妹,用us很不清楚,建議你將姊妹的職業放在父母之後) one way to get along with people keeping gratitude that toward people in every day life. I have an older (sister/brother) whose occupation is a sales, and a younger sister who is a college student. Although we are in the different fields, we also strive hardly in order to reach our dreams.When I was in the junior high school, I was fat, but I was still confident to meet people and face challenges. Because I am brave to accept any kind of new things and love to help people, so I always have good interpersonal relationship with people.........I was born in a well-fixed family, my parents... Both My parents are retired and they have been volunteers for many years.I have an older sister/brother whose occupation is a sales, and a younger sister who is a college student. Although we are in the different fields, we also strive hardly in order to reach our dreams.Since I was a child, my partent have been teaching us that one way to get along with people is to keep gratitude toward people in every day life. Accordingly, I have good relationship with people. For example, I was fat when I was in the junior high school, many people lost confidence to face people when they were fat, but I was still confident to meet people and love to help people.In addition, I am brave to accept any kind of new things and willing to face challenges. This attitude is very helpful to face any situation that confront to me. I am interested in volleyball, badminton, calligraphy and piano; these activities train my team spirit, physical force and patient as well as to enhance my confidence.  

  • 1 0 年前

    我出生在一個well-fixed 家庭, 我的父母給我們接受好教育取決於勇敢的精神和節儉的態度。我的父母退休了並且他們是兩個長期志願者。因為我是孩子, 他們教我們單程的原因相處與人, 必須安排謝意的心臟取決於dailiness 例子。我有一更老誰佔領銷售和是大學生的一個妹妹。雖然我們是在另外領域, 我們並且努力為了我們的夢想。因為我學習了在初中, 我開始了對油脂, 但我確信地仍然面對以許多人和事。由於I 勇敢在企圖對新事和愛幫助人民, 因此我總有好人際的關係和好生活。我喜歡活動關於排球、羽毛球、書法和鋼琴。他們能訓練我的團隊精神、體力和患者和信心。

  • 1 0 年前

    I am from a middle class family. My parent were hard working couple and did their best to raise me and my siblings. Now, my parents were retired and they are both volunteers in community services. Since I was a child, they have taught us the reasons of one's way of getting along with people and always be grateful. About my siblings, I have an elder brother who is a salesman and a younger sister who studies in college. Although my siblings and I have followed different paths of life, we are equally energetic to pursue our dream. Since I studied in the junior high school, I have had problem on my weight. But I don't think being overweight is an excuse. I always have good interpersonal relationship and nice life because I love to help my friends, try new things and bring fresh ideas. During my leisure, I like to play volleyball, badminton. I am skillful in calligraphy and piano as well. They can train my team spirit, physical force and patient and confidence.

    2006-10-18 02:12:19 補充:

    一時大意 "My parents were hard working couple"

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