miko 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

可以幫我看看文法有沒有錯誤

M: Fanny, it is me.

F: Hi may. how is your trip?

M: I just got back last night,from Hawaii.

F: How was the weather?

M: Great. I am having a great time. The weather is perfect.

Every day is warm, sunny, and great. How is it there?

F: It is cold and reamed this morning.

The weather it is getting colder. It is supposed to have a big storm tomorrow.

M: too bad! Did you hear the weather . report today?

F: not. What is happen?

M: I saw on TV this morning. A hurricane is coming .

T here will be lots of storing winds and hoary rain tomorrow.

It is a big hurricane and it is coming up the coast of Taiwan.

F: Hurricane? I can’t believe it. I hate the wicked weather.

I hate the cloudy and rainy.

M: All right, but I like the rain day.Because the feeling to be very crisp after rains.

F: really? I like to go to Australia in October.

Because there is cool and sometimes warm.

i like the sunny of Australia. What place has the boost weather do think?

M: I think the best weather is in the south of TAIWAN.

It is usually. Warm and sunny. .

What place has the boost weather do think?

F: I like the weather in Taichung,because the climate of Taichung is moderate.

Has any type of the weather to let your impression.

M: The typhoon hit Kaohsiung, and it was bring heavy rain.

It is a hazy day there fore. I hope it won't happen again this year.

Has any type the weather to let your impression be profound

F: Some year here has snowed in March at Taiwan,I

ncluding the Yang Ming also looked obtains the snow,

Really is the marvelous sight

M: Oh. I remember! unbelievable aspects 

F: Yeah! a typhoon is coming almost . I should have water and enough food.

And you?

M: I should have enough food torch and battery.

F: All right! I should prepare right now. See you later

M: See you.

2 個解答

評分
  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    M: Fanny, it is me.

    F: Hi may, how was your trip?

    M: I just got back last night from Hawaii.

    F: How was the weather?

    M: Great! I had a great time. The weather is perfect.

    Every day is warm, sunny, and great. How was it there?

    F: It was cold and reamed this morning.

    The weather is getting colder. We are expecting to have a big storm tomorrow.

    M: Too bad! Did you hear the weather report today?

    F: No, what's happened?

    M: I saw on TV this morning, a hurricane is coming .

    T here will be lots of strong winds and hoary rain tomorrow.

    It is a big hurricane and it is coming up the coast of Taiwan.

    F: Hurricane? I can’t believe it. I hate the wicked weather.

    I hate the cloudy and rainy days.

    M: All right, but I like the raining days, because it feels very crisp after the rain.

    F: Really? I would like to go to Australia in October,

    because it is cool and sometimes warm there.

    I like the sun shine of Australia. What place do you think has the best weather?

    M: I think the south part of TAIWAN has the best weather.

    It is usually warm and sunny.

    What place do you think has the best weather?

    F: I like the weather in Taichung,because the climate of Taichung is moderate.

    What kind of the weather have left your an impression?

    M: When the typhoon hit Kaohsiung, and it brought heavy rain.

    It was hazy everyday there before. I hope it won't happen again this year.

    Has any type of the weather leave you a profound impression?

    F: Some year ago it had snowed in March at Taiwan.

    The Yang Ming Mountain also obtained some snow.

    It was a really marvelous sight!

    M: Oh. I remember! Unbelievable aspects 

    F: Yeah! a typhoon is almost coming. I should store enough water and food.

    And you?

    M: I should have enough food, torch, and battery.

    F: All right! I am going to prepare right now. See you later!

    M: See you.

    我改ㄌ一下, 把一些不順口的地方也改ㄌ

    請多指教!

    參考資料: Me
    • 登入以對解答發表意見
  • 1 0 年前

    M: Fanny. It is me.

    F: Hi, May. How’s your trip?

    M: I just got back last night from Hawaii.

    F: How was the weather?

    M: Great. I have a great time over there. The weather was perfect. It was warm and sunny everyday. How was it there?

    F: It’s cold this morning. The weather is getting cold now. Actually, it’s supposed to have a big storm tomorrow.

    M: Too bad! Did you hear the weather report today?

    F: Not. What happened?

    M: I saw on TV this morning, and a hurricane is coming soon. There will be a lot of wind and rain tomorrow. It’s a big hurricane and it’s coming from the coast of Taiwan.

    F: Hurricane? I can’t believe it. I hate wicked weather. In fact, I hate cloudy and rainy day.

    M: Well, but I like raining day because the feeling is very crisp after rains.

    F: Really? I like to go to Australia in October. In this season, the weather is not so cold but warm in Australia. I like the sunshine in Australia. Which place do you think it got the best weather?

    M: I think the best weather is in the South of Taiwan. It’s usually warm and sunny. What other place do you think is the second best?

    F: I think the second best would be the weather in Taichung because the climate in Taichung is moderate. The weather changes a lot, so I can have many different impressions.

    M: When the typhoon hit Kaohsiung, it brought a heavy rain. It was a hazy day over there. I hope it won’t happen again this year.

    F: For some year in Taiwan, it has snowed in March especially in the mountain of Yang Ming. The sight in the mountain of Yang Ming is very marvelous.

    M: Oh, ya. I remember it! It’s an unbelievable aspect.

    F: Yeah! Typhoon is coming soon. I should store enough water and food.

    M: Of course! I should also store some foods, torches and batteries.

    F: All right! I should prepare it right now. I’ll see you later.

    M: See you.

    參考資料: myself
    • 登入以對解答發表意見
還有問題?馬上發問,尋求解答。