英文達人請幫我看一下我寫的文章有沒有該修改的

拜託英文達人幫我看看我的文章有沒有需要改進的地方或者需要再加強的,先謝謝了。About my future, I hope I can find a good job relate with English and business after I graduate from university. Although I am study in night school and I have a part time job in daytime. I still emphasize on my schoolwork. I prefer to be a teacher, translatress or... 顯示更多 拜託英文達人幫我看看我的文章有沒有需要改進的地方或者需要再加強的,先謝謝了。About my future, I hope I can find a good job relate with English and business after I graduate from university. Although I am study in night school and I have a part time job in daytime. I still emphasize on my schoolwork. I prefer to be a teacher, translatress or international trader. None of the jobs are easy. I should learn more English and computer ability to improve my professional knowledge during last two years in the university. At the same time, I need to learn a second foreign language-Japanese, and I also want to learn other professional knowledge-commercial course. I should raise my competitive strength. Many people are excellent, I wish I can be outstanding and get more job chance. I will get some license before I graduate. Learning new thing and knowledge are important, maybe I will to reach the higher degree, continue study Master. I hope my future will be systematical and dreams come true. I can have a better life than now.
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