發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

急! 請幫我訂正英文

我明天一早就要用了

所以希望今晚9點前可以得到答案

內容是上週末發生的事

所以麻煩注意一下時態,謝謝!

中文意思如下:

因為天氣變涼了所以我就趁著週末時去添購衣物

首先我去買了一件的藍色外套

接著我又買了一雙長靴

後來又看上一條昂貴的牛仔褲

最後我就沒錢坐公車回家了!

自己翻完覺得很不對的英文:

Because the weather was getting cooler, I used weekend bought some clothes. First, I bought a cute blue coat. Then I bought a pair of boots. Then I picked an expensive pair of jeans. Finally, I didn’t have money to taken the bus to go home.

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對了!

這個短文要用First...Then...Finally這類的序數連接

很抱歉造成各位的困擾!

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    因為天氣變涼了所以我就趁著週末時去添購衣物

    首先我去買了一件的藍色外套

    接著我又買了一雙長靴

    後來又看上一條昂貴的牛仔褲

    最後我就沒錢坐公車回家了!

    這是你原來的

    Because the weather was getting cooler, I used weekend bought some clothes. First, I bought a cute blue coat. Then I bought a pair of boots. Then I picked an expensive pair of jeans. Finally, I didn’t have money to taken the bus to go home.

    這是我稍加改寫的

    I bought some clothes on weekend because the weather was getting cooler

    First, I bought a cute blue coat.

    Then I bought a pair of boots.

    Right after that, I picked on an expensive pair of jeans and bought it too.

    Finally, I didn’t have money to take bus to go home.

    picked on 選中 挑選

    Right after that 緊接著

    I didn’t have money to taken the bus to go home

    應該用 TO TAKE

    這裡是不定詞的用法

    TO 之後的動詞改用原形

    THE BUS的用法不好 因為之前並沒有提到

    你搭了哪一輛BUS過來 所以我改為 BUS

    I used weekend bought some clothes

    這裡的話 應該在WEEKEND之後加一個TO 然後就BOUGHT改為BUY

    也一樣是不定詞的用法

    另外一個選擇是

    將USED改為 SPENT 後面直接 WEEKEND BUYING SOME CLOTHES

    表示 你把WEEKEND的時間花在買衣服上面了

    文法上來說

    因為使用了SPEND這個有特殊用法的動詞

  • 心星
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前

    Since the weather was getting cooler and cooler, so I went to buy some clothes last weekend . I firstly bought a cute blue jacket, and then I bought a pair of boots. Afterward I also got an expensive pair of jeans. At the end, I didn’t even have enough money to take bus home. 我把整理了一下和改的地方用粗體字並加上色。

  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    因為天氣變涼了所以我就趁著週末時去添購衣物>because of the weather was getting cold,so i bought some clothes on weekend~

    首先我去買了一件的藍色外套>i bought a blue jacket first~

    接著我又買了一雙長靴>then i bought a pair of boot~

    後來又看上一條昂貴的牛仔褲>i also bought a pair of blue jeans with high priced also~

    最後我就沒錢坐公車回家了>so that i have no money to go home by bus~

    希望可幫到你吧^^

    2006-11-07 17:48:23 補充:

    weekend前應加上"last"這個字才對,因是上禮拜發的事了~~

    參考資料: 小jo
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